Full House
a hundred-word story17 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, what a fun comment from Kelly. I would never have thought of that, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading this entry. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Haha, what a fun comment from Kelly. I would never have thought of that, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading this entry. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Jan
Comment from Pam Norris
This is a clever piece, you have created both a believable situation and believable characters.I liked the last line, very good. Best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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This is a clever piece, you have created both a believable situation and believable characters.I liked the last line, very good. Best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Pam
Comment from Bichon
Even though I'm not very familiar with games surrounding cards, I enjoyed the simplicity and humour from this game! It was easy to follow along with and told a fun story.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Even though I'm not very familiar with games surrounding cards, I enjoyed the simplicity and humour from this game! It was easy to follow along with and told a fun story.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Bichon
Comment from pome lover
cute. cute.
Well that is taking it to the extreme for Kevin, I guess, but he didn't lose much. (smile)
Fun story of one-upmanship by wife. ha!.
Good entry for the 100 word dash
pome lover
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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cute. cute.
Well that is taking it to the extreme for Kevin, I guess, but he didn't lose much. (smile)
Fun story of one-upmanship by wife. ha!.
Good entry for the 100 word dash
pome lover
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you, pl
Comment from royowen
It's not often one finds a losing full house even if it's tens over eights. And one will always be telling the tale of the time one lost to a picture "right neighbourhood" set of cards, well done, this is an excellent entry in this 100 word dash contest. Good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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It's not often one finds a losing full house even if it's tens over eights. And one will always be telling the tale of the time one lost to a picture "right neighbourhood" set of cards, well done, this is an excellent entry in this 100 word dash contest. Good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you, royowen
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Well done
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Cute story about a card game. I'm not a card player, and also the names are a little similar, so I had to read it twice to understand it, but it works. The last line cinches the story. It's a good picture, too.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Cute story about a card game. I'm not a card player, and also the names are a little similar, so I had to read it twice to understand it, but it works. The last line cinches the story. It's a good picture, too.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you, MKB
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You're very welcome.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Playing cards is a great way to hone thinking. Your story is a great story for the 100 Word Dash writing entry. Well done. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Playing cards is a great way to hone thinking. Your story is a great story for the 100 Word Dash writing entry. Well done. Good luck!
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you, thaities.
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You're very welcome!
