What Was Missing
A light and sweet rispetto17 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
Very nice. So he's the one responsible for making all us men subservient. This poem is cute and it sure qualifies as light and sweet. It produced a smile.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Very nice. So he's the one responsible for making all us men subservient. This poem is cute and it sure qualifies as light and sweet. It produced a smile.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this fun little piece!
Comment from BeasPeas
Love this. What would they do without us? The drawing is cute and amusing. She looks just so self satisfied. Her long hair is her clothing. Best of luck in the contest with this terrific entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Love this. What would they do without us? The drawing is cute and amusing. She looks just so self satisfied. Her long hair is her clothing. Best of luck in the contest with this terrific entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from Drew Delaney
A good example of what it is like to be alone and have nobody especially when one is young. Everybody needs somebody and this was a great poem to share.
Drew
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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A good example of what it is like to be alone and have nobody especially when one is young. Everybody needs somebody and this was a great poem to share.
Drew
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Gloria ....
Well this is just a wonderful rispetto, author. Light and sweet indeed and particularly those fruits and nuts to eat.
But then even sweeter still, Eve.
An excellent poem and entry into this contest. Wishing you much luck in the booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Well this is just a wonderful rispetto, author. Light and sweet indeed and particularly those fruits and nuts to eat.
But then even sweeter still, Eve.
An excellent poem and entry into this contest. Wishing you much luck in the booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a well-written and delightful "sweet and light" love poem. The rispetto is an appealing style. You have done well with it. I applaud your topic and approach.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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This is a well-written and delightful "sweet and light" love poem. The rispetto is an appealing style. You have done well with it. I applaud your topic and approach.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! Glad you liked this piece.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. He saw that man felt a bit alone. He looked at all of the animals realizing that each one had a mate. The Lord gave him eve as you've so eloquently stated. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I like this. He saw that man felt a bit alone. He looked at all of the animals realizing that each one had a mate. The Lord gave him eve as you've so eloquently stated. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! So glad you like this piece.
Comment from Opeyemi Diamond
Smiles... I like it. It's so sweet. The image is pretty too. The content is lovely
Thanks for sharing
It's beautiful
Well done and wish you all the best
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Smiles... I like it. It's so sweet. The image is pretty too. The content is lovely
Thanks for sharing
It's beautiful
Well done and wish you all the best
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this lighthearted piece.
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You're welcome
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a cute fun poem about Adam and Eve. You did an excellent job. I didn't find anything to tell you about. Good luck in the contest. Stay well. Shirley
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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What a cute fun poem about Adam and Eve. You did an excellent job. I didn't find anything to tell you about. Good luck in the contest. Stay well. Shirley
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! I?m glad you enjoyed this lighthearted piece.
Comment from Puzzle
OHHH MYYY CUUUUTE!!!! You have my vote in this contest for sure. How freaking adorable is this? And I know from a feminist point of view this is kind of offensive. Lol. Because as a woman I hate thinking that I was made to please a man. But the "girly girl" in me thinks this is cute. Plus I am catholic and I know the story. And this follows the traditional story....but it's written way better.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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OHHH MYYY CUUUUTE!!!! You have my vote in this contest for sure. How freaking adorable is this? And I know from a feminist point of view this is kind of offensive. Lol. Because as a woman I hate thinking that I was made to please a man. But the "girly girl" in me thinks this is cute. Plus I am catholic and I know the story. And this follows the traditional story....but it's written way better.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I?m glad you enjoyed this lighthearted piece! To be honest - feminists should not be offended by it. Because where would the human race be, without a woman? Adam would still be alone with his fruits and nuts. They need us...lol. Thanks for dropping by to read and review.
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Hahaha. True true. Eve was his best friend. I like that thought
Comment from Ross E Silke
Thanks for sharing this colourful poem. I really like the artwork and the colouring book style presentation; Eve looks interesting and like she would be well after Adam, lol. I like the ideas of fruit in this and the word choices you use are perfect fitting. Fruit and nuts sounds good. :0)) Yes, Adam was probably rather lonesome and needed a help mate. It rhymes and flows very well. Good job, much enjoyed. A
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thanks for sharing this colourful poem. I really like the artwork and the colouring book style presentation; Eve looks interesting and like she would be well after Adam, lol. I like the ideas of fruit in this and the word choices you use are perfect fitting. Fruit and nuts sounds good. :0)) Yes, Adam was probably rather lonesome and needed a help mate. It rhymes and flows very well. Good job, much enjoyed. A
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this fun piece.
