What Was Missing
A light and sweet rispetto17 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the light and sweet writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the light and sweet writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, teri
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this fun piece.
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
A very creative and descriptive poem. I think it works really well as a light and sweet romance poem. The rhymes in particular I think help to create the sense of fun with it.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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A very creative and descriptive poem. I think it works really well as a light and sweet romance poem. The rhymes in particular I think help to create the sense of fun with it.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this fun piece.
Comment from RodG
Eden before Eve must have been a lonely place for Adam. I like this light and sweet tale of how she came into his life. Rod
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Eden before Eve must have been a lonely place for Adam. I like this light and sweet tale of how she came into his life. Rod
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous stars!
Comment from Ogden
You devised a very clever way to compete in this contest, with some help from God, and without writing one of those soupy messes that we have come to expect in his category.
Kudos!
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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You devised a very clever way to compete in this contest, with some help from God, and without writing one of those soupy messes that we have come to expect in his category.
Kudos!
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Can?t stand mushy messes myself. Thank you for the kind review and generous rating.
Comment from zanya
I smile as I read this interesting angle on the story of Creation -soulmates, I guess, we all need a soulmate to share life's journey - lovely illustration
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I smile as I read this interesting angle on the story of Creation -soulmates, I guess, we all need a soulmate to share life's journey - lovely illustration
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Anya Trofimova
I really like you do not reveal the characters Adam and Eve until the last few lines - it makes your poem very engaging. The structure and form of this poem effectively contributes to its overall effect. Well done!
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I really like you do not reveal the characters Adam and Eve until the last few lines - it makes your poem very engaging. The structure and form of this poem effectively contributes to its overall effect. Well done!
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this fun piece!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem about Adam's missing something special even though he had everything at his fingertips he needed someone by his side to keep him company.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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A very well-written fun poem about Adam's missing something special even though he had everything at his fingertips he needed someone by his side to keep him company.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this fun piece!
