Lost in time
Buried memories19 total reviews
Comment from sammielwf
Jenintorre,
Who says powerful emotions are connected to long, large worded writings? Not this admirer of Lost in Time. I think the words that you used to illustrate the simplicity of emotion in the poems meaning was...wonderful!
All of the words/images you used would call up significance in just about any person who read them. Great job.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Jenintorre,
Who says powerful emotions are connected to long, large worded writings? Not this admirer of Lost in Time. I think the words that you used to illustrate the simplicity of emotion in the poems meaning was...wonderful!
All of the words/images you used would call up significance in just about any person who read them. Great job.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. Much appreciated. Jen.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is so true, simple little things bring up poignant memories, emotions and tears flow. Anzac day always does that to me. Congrats on the contest win, cheers
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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This is so true, simple little things bring up poignant memories, emotions and tears flow. Anzac day always does that to me. Congrats on the contest win, cheers
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Many thanks Pearl. Stay safe. Jen
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congratulations on your prize! Missed this the first time--I play catch-up when results are announced. I like the structure and repetition like bullet points! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Congratulations on your prize! Missed this the first time--I play catch-up when results are announced. I like the structure and repetition like bullet points! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thank you so much. Jen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Lost in time
by jenintorre
Hello, Jenin,
Nice 20 Syllable Poem Contest Winner. Congratulations. I can relate. For me it's usually a song. I think certain music notes opens the heart. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Lost in time
by jenintorre
Hello, Jenin,
Nice 20 Syllable Poem Contest Winner. Congratulations. I can relate. For me it's usually a song. I think certain music notes opens the heart. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Many thanks. Much appreciated. Jen.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Those words are so true, many a time I've heard something, or seen something that brings a sweet memory back and I do cry, too. Those few words said so much. Well done!! Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Those words are so true, many a time I've heard something, or seen something that brings a sweet memory back and I do cry, too. Those few words said so much. Well done!! Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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I am so pleased that you like my poem. Usually I write fiction but that is true. It came to me at one of those moments. Thanks. Jen
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is so true. I like the wonderful use of alliteration and short lines to enhance the emotion in this poem.
Congratulatons on winning the contest.
Keep wrting and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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This poem is so true. I like the wonderful use of alliteration and short lines to enhance the emotion in this poem.
Congratulatons on winning the contest.
Keep wrting and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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What a lovely review. I really appreciate it. Thank you. Jen.
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You're very welcome, Jen.
Joan
Comment from zanya
The short format poetry can often have a most powerful impact as is the case here with this particular work - reminding the reader of the significant role of sensory memory - a worthy winner
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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The short format poetry can often have a most powerful impact as is the case here with this particular work - reminding the reader of the significant role of sensory memory - a worthy winner
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you so much Zanya for your kind words. Jen
Comment from DeboraDyess
Very nice poem! Congratulations on your win. :)
It's nice that you caught so much in so few words. Things that trigger memories are such a mystery. It can be anything, as you say In the poem.
Blessings, peace and health,
Deb
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Very nice poem! Congratulations on your win. :)
It's nice that you caught so much in so few words. Things that trigger memories are such a mystery. It can be anything, as you say In the poem.
Blessings, peace and health,
Deb
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Take care. Jen
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you so much. I am over the moon.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Jen,
So true, over time we forget things that have happened in our lives. But, as you said, a song, a smell, and a story stimulates a memory of a situation. I love your last three words, "and I cry." You used a great title, "lost in time" and lovely imagery to share with your story. This is a very good 20 syllable poem, which you met the contest requiremen.
Good luck in the contest. Stay safe, healthy and safe. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Hello Jen,
So true, over time we forget things that have happened in our lives. But, as you said, a song, a smell, and a story stimulates a memory of a situation. I love your last three words, "and I cry." You used a great title, "lost in time" and lovely imagery to share with your story. This is a very good 20 syllable poem, which you met the contest requiremen.
Good luck in the contest. Stay safe, healthy and safe. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and super 6 stars. I'm so glad you like my poem. Jen.
