A Window On My World
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Truth Lies Obscured"Daily 5-7-5 simplicities for April Na-Po-Wri-Mo
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 suite about too much information and everyone seems to have their own hidden agenda to do as much damage as they can to destroy the world economy and many lives.
A very well-written 5-7-5 suite about too much information and everyone seems to have their own hidden agenda to do as much damage as they can to destroy the world economy and many lives.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
A well written poem with deep meaning. I don't know either who to believe. I don't think even the experts know what's going on. They've been in the dark too. All we can do is do what they tell us and place our trust in the Lord. I, myself, think it's too early to start letting down our guard. We know there will be more sickness and death.
Love ya and stay safe my friend!
Patty
A well written poem with deep meaning. I don't know either who to believe. I don't think even the experts know what's going on. They've been in the dark too. All we can do is do what they tell us and place our trust in the Lord. I, myself, think it's too early to start letting down our guard. We know there will be more sickness and death.
Love ya and stay safe my friend!
Patty
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
A fun commentary on a tragic state of affairs. They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder; however, I fear facts go through many filters before they are reported and the search for "Truth" dates back to ancient Greece. And I am telling you the truth! LOL! Jerry
A fun commentary on a tragic state of affairs. They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder; however, I fear facts go through many filters before they are reported and the search for "Truth" dates back to ancient Greece. And I am telling you the truth! LOL! Jerry
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Raul1
I like how you wrote that some people have a private agenda. Definitely something to look forward to. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poetry. Thanks for sharing!
I like how you wrote that some people have a private agenda. Definitely something to look forward to. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poetry. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Drew Delaney
Well, those are all good questions and with no positive answers. I liked your poems and words that are quite introspective. We want answers! Who do we trust? Well done!
Drew xx
Well, those are all good questions and with no positive answers. I liked your poems and words that are quite introspective. We want answers! Who do we trust? Well done!
Drew xx
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Gail Denham
who knows anything - for sure? only that we are still confined and people need to work. We need to be able to get out into the wild - here in the Northwes t- we only have a few real days of warm days - it needs to be used.
Good poem
who knows anything - for sure? only that we are still confined and people need to work. We need to be able to get out into the wild - here in the Northwes t- we only have a few real days of warm days - it needs to be used.
Good poem
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with you here. We are given figures and when they are reported they don't give the whole picture and therefore we are left feeling scared when actually the figures aren't that bad. Propaganda and scare mongering is reported in the news all the time, we have to read between the lines all the time. It will all die down and go away and no one will be bothered to analyse it at a future date. Only those left bereft will be asking questions Lisa, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
I so agree with you here. We are given figures and when they are reported they don't give the whole picture and therefore we are left feeling scared when actually the figures aren't that bad. Propaganda and scare mongering is reported in the news all the time, we have to read between the lines all the time. It will all die down and go away and no one will be bothered to analyse it at a future date. Only those left bereft will be asking questions Lisa, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your 5-7-5 suite is really well-written and thought-provoking. It conveys a powerful message about how the term "truth" may be tossed about and how data can be manipulated. Stanza 2 is especially on-target.
Your 5-7-5 suite is really well-written and thought-provoking. It conveys a powerful message about how the term "truth" may be tossed about and how data can be manipulated. Stanza 2 is especially on-target.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Cindy Decker
Lisa, I really like this poem. The truth is often sought, rarely found. People have an agenda. Yes, the public is often misinformed at a terrible loss sometimes. Excellent poem. I like the artistic way you lay out your poems. Best wishes for health and happiness, Cindy
Lisa, I really like this poem. The truth is often sought, rarely found. People have an agenda. Yes, the public is often misinformed at a terrible loss sometimes. Excellent poem. I like the artistic way you lay out your poems. Best wishes for health and happiness, Cindy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
LisaMay you are asking all the right questions, but unfortunately, we are being fed what the experts are conjuring from the numbers that they have. With my age as proof of living a long life, I declare, take it with a grain of salt. How often in my lifetime have I witnessed 'human error'', believe me, more often than I can count. So common sense will tell us that they are spinning the facts of the main course to make it look like dessert. I for one see a very sinister underlying cause for this "Pandemic."
Stay safe. Trust yourself only.
LisaMay you are asking all the right questions, but unfortunately, we are being fed what the experts are conjuring from the numbers that they have. With my age as proof of living a long life, I declare, take it with a grain of salt. How often in my lifetime have I witnessed 'human error'', believe me, more often than I can count. So common sense will tell us that they are spinning the facts of the main course to make it look like dessert. I for one see a very sinister underlying cause for this "Pandemic."
Stay safe. Trust yourself only.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020