Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

This is a very creative and well written entry for the contest. You have merged horror with wicked humor in that last line. Keep writing and stay safe. Bill

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thanks, Bill

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Horror writing prompt.
This story of horror is clear and well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thanks, Sharon

Comment from Kermit R. Mullins

Excellent

Best of luck with this fine entry in 100 words. This would be a Horrible situation to be in, glad it wasn't me crawling to a phone. The rhyme was smooth and very descriptive. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thanks, Kermit

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

This 100 worder is a very clever combination of humor and gore., quite macabre. The rhyming is solid in this promising writing prompt entry.
Best wishes!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thank you, Rich

reply by Rmocruz on 22-Apr-2020

You're welcome, my pleasure.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Wow, that was horror poem if I've ever read one. It's very well written amidst all the gore. It made me shudder. I liked the ending. It's a great entry for the contest. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thank you, Ulla

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Now that made me laugh! Funny! The picture with it is neat and then the red text on black background was eerily delightful! Good luck with the contest!
God bless and stay safe!
Patty

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thank you, Patty

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

Talk about horror! This sent chills up my spine. This should do well in the 100 Word Horror writing contest. Imagine being eaten alive! Good luck.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thank you, TT

Comment from Minglement

Excellent

Holy cow this is a hysterical, ghoulish read! Your entry for the 100 Word Horror Poem contest is a gem The rhyming and meter are so skillfully done. I really enjoyed it, especially the punchline. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thank you, M

reply by Minglement on 27-Apr-2020

You are most welcome. Take care, Marcia

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

Oooof. I don't necessarily like gore and horror but since it is only 100 words I figured I'd survive. It is a hilarious ending of the "one-liner". There is an interesting juxtaposition here. How you could record such a dramatic episode with rhyme is beyond me. You are very talented.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thank you, Liz

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This horror poem is well written, illustrated perfectly for theme. Good rhyming. Best of luck in the contest with this entry, which in my opinion, has an excellent chance of winning. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020

Thank you, Marilyn