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a hundred word horror poem41 total reviews
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
This poem is funny and causes a lot of laughter; a wonderful poem to read out loud. It has that rhyme in rhythmic beat that can be emphasized in exaggeration to give it more of a punch on the last line. The feelings are excited in the emotions of seeing the ghoul and anticipating being totally eaten when the dial tone is heard and the captor... Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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This poem is funny and causes a lot of laughter; a wonderful poem to read out loud. It has that rhyme in rhythmic beat that can be emphasized in exaggeration to give it more of a punch on the last line. The feelings are excited in the emotions of seeing the ghoul and anticipating being totally eaten when the dial tone is heard and the captor... Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, giovanni
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is a horror write, lots of gory guts included here and I enjoyed it because it all seemed like a bit of fun really, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Oh my goodness this is a horror write, lots of gory guts included here and I enjoyed it because it all seemed like a bit of fun really, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Opeyemi Diamond
Oh....he so got you there " no need to order out", how scary. I like your poem. The content and the rhymes too are cool. Even the image is a scary one lol...initially, I didn't even know it was a telephone. Well done
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Oh....he so got you there " no need to order out", how scary. I like your poem. The content and the rhymes too are cool. Even the image is a scary one lol...initially, I didn't even know it was a telephone. Well done
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Opeyemi
Comment from Drew Delaney
Excellent writing in this horror genre. The presentation is great. It is real gross though. The final line is good! Hope you do well in the contest! Have a ghoul of a day!
Drew
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Excellent writing in this horror genre. The presentation is great. It is real gross though. The final line is good! Hope you do well in the contest! Have a ghoul of a day!
Drew
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Drew
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is a bit morbid and gruesome. You've met the challenge beautifully in this one. I can see why the ghoul doesn't want to order out. It's making a meal out of you. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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This is a bit morbid and gruesome. You've met the challenge beautifully in this one. I can see why the ghoul doesn't want to order out. It's making a meal out of you. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Jeffrey
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a ghoulish poem! You did a great job and it reminded me of the Jeffrey Dommer story. I think I spelled his name right. Good luck in the contest. Take care and stay well. Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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What a ghoulish poem! You did a great job and it reminded me of the Jeffrey Dommer story. I think I spelled his name right. Good luck in the contest. Take care and stay well. Shirley
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Shirley It was Dahmer. : )
Comment from Bichon
Oh my. This was a very graphic poem! Nonetheless, you have definitely written a great horror poem. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry. I do not think I will be reading it a second time though, need to recover, haha.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Oh my. This was a very graphic poem! Nonetheless, you have definitely written a great horror poem. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry. I do not think I will be reading it a second time though, need to recover, haha.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Bichon
Comment from J.R. Preston
Gruesome and gory, a perfect entry for the poem contest. It was well written and flowed nicely.
Best of luck, and thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading it!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Gruesome and gory, a perfect entry for the poem contest. It was well written and flowed nicely.
Best of luck, and thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading it!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, JR
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend
Great entry for the 100 Word Horror writing prompt contest. It's very gory and suspenseful for a 100 flash fiction. It's hard to have a complete story in short form. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend
Great entry for the 100 Word Horror writing prompt contest. It's very gory and suspenseful for a 100 flash fiction. It's hard to have a complete story in short form. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, GBR
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There's no need to order out!!!!! That is so gruesome! That poor person being eaten alive, that is going to give me nightmares! It's an excellent contest entry, really scary, and I mean that! Well done and good luck in the contest, not that I think you need it! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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There's no need to order out!!!!! That is so gruesome! That poor person being eaten alive, that is going to give me nightmares! It's an excellent contest entry, really scary, and I mean that! Well done and good luck in the contest, not that I think you need it! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Sandra
