Your Mood Will Improve
Strategies for happiness:13 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt.
This fun verse tells of things that make a person feel happy.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt.
This fun verse tells of things that make a person feel happy.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt contest. Perfect poetic form and presentation. It's very happy upbeat. Good luck in the contest.
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Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt contest. Perfect poetic form and presentation. It's very happy upbeat. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This happy poem, Your Mood Will Improve, reminds us to look at a child and a puppy, either or together, and slip into some good feelings for awhile.
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This happy poem, Your Mood Will Improve, reminds us to look at a child and a puppy, either or together, and slip into some good feelings for awhile.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from sunnilicious
That puppy would improve anybody's life with happiness. I want to hold the puppy. Nice artwork choice for presentation. This was wonderfully storytelling in a poem. Enjoyable to read as it was fun. Great work :)
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That puppy would improve anybody's life with happiness. I want to hold the puppy. Nice artwork choice for presentation. This was wonderfully storytelling in a poem. Enjoyable to read as it was fun. Great work :)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Drew Delaney
That is a happy poem. We need to hear more happy these days. Very cute puppy in the picture! The happiness will go away once it gets a hold of a shoe. LOL
Drew
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That is a happy poem. We need to hear more happy these days. Very cute puppy in the picture! The happiness will go away once it gets a hold of a shoe. LOL
Drew
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from J.R. Preston
Loved it! You had me hooked from the very beginning. Every line made me smile more than the one before it. Well done and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing!
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Loved it! You had me hooked from the very beginning. Every line made me smile more than the one before it. Well done and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Cindy Decker
Wow, I like your poem. It has a fast beat, if you read it that way, and it is extremely enjoyable. I used to use the word razzmatazz like that too, I would like to bring it back into my vocabulary. Precious puppy photo. Very good work.
Cindy
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Wow, I like your poem. It has a fast beat, if you read it that way, and it is extremely enjoyable. I used to use the word razzmatazz like that too, I would like to bring it back into my vocabulary. Precious puppy photo. Very good work.
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this happy poem of encouragement that will brighten the day. We all need to stay busy and keep thinking positive thoughts in this crazy world. Keep writing and stay safe. Bill
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Thanks for sharing this happy poem of encouragement that will brighten the day. We all need to stay busy and keep thinking positive thoughts in this crazy world. Keep writing and stay safe. Bill
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Kathleen S.
You've written a very creative and happy poem. It's full of life and positive. It's very universal and encouraging as well. One should always seek for ways to improve one's way of living. Well done. :)
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You've written a very creative and happy poem. It's full of life and positive. It's very universal and encouraging as well. One should always seek for ways to improve one's way of living. Well done. :)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love this happy poem of yours, embrace a pet, play with it, and let the horrible pandemic behind :"There need be no room for doom and gloom --
it depends on what you choose.
To banish your blues, pull on your shoes
and go for a walk, or phone a friend to talk.
What is it that makes your heart move?
Embrace it! Your mood will improve."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Love this happy poem of yours, embrace a pet, play with it, and let the horrible pandemic behind :"There need be no room for doom and gloom --
it depends on what you choose.
To banish your blues, pull on your shoes
and go for a walk, or phone a friend to talk.
What is it that makes your heart move?
Embrace it! Your mood will improve."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
