Bees, Please!
The bees have a purpose to fulfill.21 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were educating, interesting and creative. I enjoyed
the read of this poem. The author conveys interesting facts about bees.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
Hope you had a great weekend!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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The author's words were educating, interesting and creative. I enjoyed
the read of this poem. The author conveys interesting facts about bees.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
Hope you had a great weekend!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and your nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Bichon
I really enjoyed reading this poem! You were extremely clear in your sediments, we would be hopeless without our beloved bees. We truly must be careful and protect them.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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I really enjoyed reading this poem! You were extremely clear in your sediments, we would be hopeless without our beloved bees. We truly must be careful and protect them.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Hey! I am certain I voted for this. Am I allowed to say that? I not only thought it was poetically wonderful, but it educated and informed. Fantastic job! An overall amazing piece of work about the bee and the importance in our world.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Hey! I am certain I voted for this. Am I allowed to say that? I not only thought it was poetically wonderful, but it educated and informed. Fantastic job! An overall amazing piece of work about the bee and the importance in our world.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you Wendy, I appreciate your review, comments and you vote. I was surprised and delighted to be a winner because I wasn't winning when I went to bed. There were a lot of good entries.
Beth
Comment from joycetreasures
Beth,
This a lovely poem about the bees and their pollination. I never thought of the Bees the way you explained it in your poem. I always thought of them as pests and stingers. Einstein makes a lot since about the life cycle of the bees, and what they do for plants. This is a lovely well-written poem. Like man, the Bees have a purpose also. I will definitely look at them from a distance different. No errors and your image is so fitting. Thanks. Good job, Beth.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Beth,
This a lovely poem about the bees and their pollination. I never thought of the Bees the way you explained it in your poem. I always thought of them as pests and stingers. Einstein makes a lot since about the life cycle of the bees, and what they do for plants. This is a lovely well-written poem. Like man, the Bees have a purpose also. I will definitely look at them from a distance different. No errors and your image is so fitting. Thanks. Good job, Beth.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and the lovely comments. I so glad it made sense to you. I took that that picture. The bee came out so clearly I was proud of it.
Beth
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You are welcome. Great photography!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
It's easy to see why this entry won. Your skillfully-written, cautionary,
informative poem conveys a powerful message about how mankind is failing to do what God commanded.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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It's easy to see why this entry won. Your skillfully-written, cautionary,
informative poem conveys a powerful message about how mankind is failing to do what God commanded.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and lovely comments. I was surprised with the win because I wasn't winning when I wen to bed
Beth
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
We should listen to Einstein, and the environmentalists, and stop killing off our little friends. As I'm fond of saying, I wouldn't want to snuggle up to one, but we need these little expert navigators and pollinators to replenish the earth's supplies of the many things that keep it, and us going. Your poem describes the situation beautifully.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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We should listen to Einstein, and the environmentalists, and stop killing off our little friends. As I'm fond of saying, I wouldn't want to snuggle up to one, but we need these little expert navigators and pollinators to replenish the earth's supplies of the many things that keep it, and us going. Your poem describes the situation beautifully.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and the wonderful comments. Since I the contest is over, I can sign my name.
Beth
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Congratulations on your first-place win! I know it was a tie, but it's a very nice honor. I was so happy when I learned it was you!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love everything about this. You've expressed beautifully the usefulness of bees. I think that we need to rethink a few things and stop killing off our important little friends. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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I love everything about this. You've expressed beautifully the usefulness of bees. I think that we need to rethink a few things and stop killing off our important little friends. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you, so much for the review and the wonderful comments. I think you helped me share the winning prize. I really appreciate it.
Beth
Comment from Shirley McLain
A wonderful poem about how precious the bee is. The picture you have posted is what we call a hornet here in Oklahoma. They live in the ground and can be very aggressive. You did a great job. No errors to be found. Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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A wonderful poem about how precious the bee is. The picture you have posted is what we call a hornet here in Oklahoma. They live in the ground and can be very aggressive. You did a great job. No errors to be found. Shirley
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comment.
Comment from Opeyemi Diamond
This is a beautiful poem. Yes, the bees are very important to the earth. We even get honey from them, how sweet!!!
We can't let them perish. The image of your poem is lovely. Well done
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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This is a beautiful poem. Yes, the bees are very important to the earth. We even get honey from them, how sweet!!!
We can't let them perish. The image of your poem is lovely. Well done
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review and the nice comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an interesting write and bees do a fine job along with many other pollinators and I had no idea there were so many different species of bee on this earth, they are a dedicated hive, your poem is well rhymes and metered and a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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This is an interesting write and bees do a fine job along with many other pollinators and I had no idea there were so many different species of bee on this earth, they are a dedicated hive, your poem is well rhymes and metered and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you Dolly, I appreciate the review and comments.
