Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Devilish Act

Hello my friend

A fine entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt contest. The story of revenge is a scary one that happens a lot. What I don't understand is why they didn't get out of the house if they were awake.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Point taken about getting out of the house..maybe they did!

Comment from rockmann

Excellent

A good ending that might have been more of a surprise to the reader if Paul had put the wrong house on fire! Maybe next door, where kids were inside! All in all a good story and wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

There are many on this planet with the same mentality--"If I can't have him/her, no one will!" It is dangerous thinking and reasoning. Why would anyone want someone who doesn't want them?

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the100 Word Story writing prompt.
This horror story is clear and well told in so few words.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from utilized time

Excellent

Interesting story with extreme emotional pain felt within even the reader. Very good job although if Paul waited karma would have taken care of his situation and forgiveness would have set him free. Good story my friend portrayed with the devilish thoughts especially gaining attention as the ending wasn't positive for some but positive for another.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a story about devilish act and getting and using undue advantage in violation of individual right and freedom of choice, just wishing to enjoy love by force or by any means; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Rachel Joyce

Good

wow. unexpected. It was very thrilling, and the picture helped. the only thing I suggest is that next time you might want to put a warning up there for violence or maturity. Good job, and God bless you!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated