Fajitas
100 Word Story Contest Entry12 total reviews
Comment from gingermo
An entertaining story, well written and leading up to a humorous and unexpected ending. You have incorporated the necessary words easily without any sense of force. Thanks for giving me a laugh, I really enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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An entertaining story, well written and leading up to a humorous and unexpected ending. You have incorporated the necessary words easily without any sense of force. Thanks for giving me a laugh, I really enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review, gingermo. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this. I use to eat lots of different kinds of hot foods from many different cultures in my youth. Not so much anymore. This is really good and made me smile. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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I really like this. I use to eat lots of different kinds of hot foods from many different cultures in my youth. Not so much anymore. This is really good and made me smile. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Jeffrey. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Funny entry for the
100 Word Story writing prompt contest. You managed to tell a complete take from beginning to end in a short story. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend
Funny entry for the
100 Word Story writing prompt contest. You managed to tell a complete take from beginning to end in a short story. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Gypsy. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from rockmann
Maybe the problem is in adding habanero peppers....jalapenos might have been a bit milder, though still hot! Good story and was a little surprised at the ending, which is a good sign.
Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Maybe the problem is in adding habanero peppers....jalapenos might have been a bit milder, though still hot! Good story and was a little surprised at the ending, which is a good sign.
Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Rock. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from write hand blue
A simple tale which could be true, about making a delicious looking chicken fajitas and the result of putting in too much chili. It caught me by surprise and I found it amusing. Well written. Good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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A simple tale which could be true, about making a delicious looking chicken fajitas and the result of putting in too much chili. It caught me by surprise and I found it amusing. Well written. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Write. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, we pay dearly for eating spicy food and our stomachs have a problem dealing with the aftermath, not to mention the toilet business, this is a fun write, what goes in, must come out! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Oh dear, we pay dearly for eating spicy food and our stomachs have a problem dealing with the aftermath, not to mention the toilet business, this is a fun write, what goes in, must come out! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the generous stars, Dolly. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Fajitas, has the right word count and employs all the necessary words. The situation is hilarious and smacks of real-life drama on the toilet.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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This story, Fajitas, has the right word count and employs all the necessary words. The situation is hilarious and smacks of real-life drama on the toilet.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Bill. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from LyndaS
Ha! This is hilarious and gross. My kind of humor. Great little COMPLETE story with a yummy picture. I enjoyed this. Luck to you in the polls. Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Ha! This is hilarious and gross. My kind of humor. Great little COMPLETE story with a yummy picture. I enjoyed this. Luck to you in the polls. Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Lynda. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Yes, the pic does look delicious. I had a friend help me pick it out. Have a wonderful weekend, L. Thank you again.
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Comment from Susan X Smith
Ha, ha. This is a humorous story with a punch line at the end. You created a scene in a limited amount of words. The picture is quite tempting. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Ha, ha. This is a humorous story with a punch line at the end. You created a scene in a limited amount of words. The picture is quite tempting. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Susan. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, the retribution of the old Aztec gods.
I, too, relish spicy foods. Mexican, Thai, Chinese, Middle Eastern.
But not everyone shares our appetite for such thrilling cuisine--nor to they have the stomach for it.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Ah, the retribution of the old Aztec gods.
I, too, relish spicy foods. Mexican, Thai, Chinese, Middle Eastern.
But not everyone shares our appetite for such thrilling cuisine--nor to they have the stomach for it.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Yeah, it's not for everybody. lol I do love all the foods you mentioned. Thank you for the great review, Lee. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. Have yourself a great weekend.
