senryu (many walks of life)
Encouragement for getting out of a rut.20 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
I wish I could, author. But they got me tied to the house. I'm glad just to be able to walk the dog. :) This is a good write. Thank you for sharing. I wish... Yet maybe one day. :)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I wish I could, author. But they got me tied to the house. I'm glad just to be able to walk the dog. :) This is a good write. Thank you for sharing. I wish... Yet maybe one day. :)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Yes, it gets a bit boring just walking around the kitchen table! Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Minglement
Good advice and encouragement in this nice entry for the senryu contest. Good illustration as well to set the stage for your theme. I ish you luck in the contest.
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Good advice and encouragement in this nice entry for the senryu contest. Good illustration as well to set the stage for your theme. I ish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Write a Senryu writing prompt.
This short verse has a clear message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Write a Senryu writing prompt.
This short verse has a clear message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
It is true that there are many streets to success. It is our choice to continue down a dead end street, find a highway. This is a great contest entry. Good luck.
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It is true that there are many streets to success. It is our choice to continue down a dead end street, find a highway. This is a great contest entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery author. The picture you chose to pair with your well-chosen words is beautiful. Your words in the senyru flow smoothly with a good message. Good job, too, with the syllable count per line. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery author. The picture you chose to pair with your well-chosen words is beautiful. Your words in the senyru flow smoothly with a good message. Good job, too, with the syllable count per line. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
Comment from Raul1
This meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. It has a chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Good work. Good luck in the contest!
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This meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. It has a chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Good work. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, love the wit in this fine senryu. How many dead end streets do we wander down even seeing the sign and thinking of there must be some way around it. lol
All your word choices work in concert for a cohesive write of wit.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
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Ha, love the wit in this fine senryu. How many dead end streets do we wander down even seeing the sign and thinking of there must be some way around it. lol
All your word choices work in concert for a cohesive write of wit.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
'Stop beating the dead horse' stated with a much brighter outlook here!! :) :) A great offering for the senryu contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck to you! ;)
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'Stop beating the dead horse' stated with a much brighter outlook here!! :) :) A great offering for the senryu contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck to you! ;)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
Comment from Rmocruz
Great advise in this well constructed sentence. The photo-art selection reinforces your message. Best wishes in the contest, with this promising
entry.
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Great advise in this well constructed sentence. The photo-art selection reinforces your message. Best wishes in the contest, with this promising
entry.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the message conveyed in this. Like you've stated so eloquently, their are many ways that one can be successful in this life. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done !
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I love the message conveyed in this. Like you've stated so eloquently, their are many ways that one can be successful in this life. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done !
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
