Dreams of Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Pen Pictures"A word collage about my life.
6 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
You have completed the requirements for a 5-syllable/ 7- syllable/ 5-syllable poem.
What a great way to think of 'writing'! Good picture choice.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 poetry contest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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You have completed the requirements for a 5-syllable/ 7- syllable/ 5-syllable poem.
What a great way to think of 'writing'! Good picture choice.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 poetry contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Comment from suep
Great combination of artwork and words to depict the image that the pen forms. Love the line 'each selected word' showing the importance of our word choices. Nice work! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Great combination of artwork and words to depict the image that the pen forms. Love the line 'each selected word' showing the importance of our word choices. Nice work! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much. I really appreciate your comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Use a pencil -- it's better for the patience level when you 'mess up' - lol! ;) :) An awesome offering for the contest today, anon -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Use a pencil -- it's better for the patience level when you 'mess up' - lol! ;) :) An awesome offering for the contest today, anon -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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You're right about the pencil. Unfortunately I couldn't get it to work and so still stay within the syllable count. Appreciate the review. Thank you so much for your comments.
Comment from Janilou
What a fabulous way to describe this! I have never thought about it that way but you are correct. It's amazing to me how just a few words can create such a vivid mental image. Pen pictures indeed.
Great writing prompt entry.
Jan
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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What a fabulous way to describe this! I have never thought about it that way but you are correct. It's amazing to me how just a few words can create such a vivid mental image. Pen pictures indeed.
Great writing prompt entry.
Jan
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Greatly appreciate the review and comments. Thank you ever so much for the six stars.
Comment from sweetthanesue
I like this 5/7/5 poem. Has uplifting feeling about it.. The visual compliments the verse. Carefree and happiness. Relaxing can be a pen to paper.. Creative.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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I like this 5/7/5 poem. Has uplifting feeling about it.. The visual compliments the verse. Carefree and happiness. Relaxing can be a pen to paper.. Creative.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork.
-The syllable count
is good, along with
the effective use of
one continuous thought.
-A good topic and description.
-I like how each line links
to the next with words,
images, and "pen picture."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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-Nice artwork.
-The syllable count
is good, along with
the effective use of
one continuous thought.
-A good topic and description.
-I like how each line links
to the next with words,
images, and "pen picture."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much for the review. I really appreciate your comments.
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You are quite welcome.