Any Body
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Comment from rjuselius
This is an intriguing piece of poetry dear anonymous! I think you have managed to convey the meaning of a bodyin its olen right.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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This is an intriguing piece of poetry dear anonymous! I think you have managed to convey the meaning of a bodyin its olen right.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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Comment from amada
I like these lines the best: "Balance creates my consciousness
Ego displays its pompousness..." Your poem here is very deep, I enjoyed the depth of your lines, for sure very wise comments.
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I like these lines the best: "Balance creates my consciousness
Ego displays its pompousness..." Your poem here is very deep, I enjoyed the depth of your lines, for sure very wise comments.
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Comment from dragonpoet
These aabb quatrains with an ending monorhyme quatrain remind us that what we see in the mirror is only temporary. We all need to reflect the best of ourselves while we are here.
Good luck with the prompt contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
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These aabb quatrains with an ending monorhyme quatrain remind us that what we see in the mirror is only temporary. We all need to reflect the best of ourselves while we are here.
Good luck with the prompt contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
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Don't mention it,
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Comment from jaded831
You met the criteria, your words flowed, your rhymes created a smooth rhythm. My favorite stanzas were the first and the last, you made me think, I like that. Using four rhymes in your last stanza added to the beauty of the piece.
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You met the criteria, your words flowed, your rhymes created a smooth rhythm. My favorite stanzas were the first and the last, you made me think, I like that. Using four rhymes in your last stanza added to the beauty of the piece.
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Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Romance Poetry meeting the required norms, having lucid wording, smooth flow from top to bottom with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"When it exists as the mirror
There is no more human error"
Best of Luck in the contest.
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Romance Poetry meeting the required norms, having lucid wording, smooth flow from top to bottom with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"When it exists as the mirror
There is no more human error"
Best of Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
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Cogitator, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from write hand blue
I believe this is a self descriptive poem of the features a person understands about ones self. It has a nice flow of words especially on the second reading. I like the word choice. It should stand a good chance in the prompt. Good luck. ~Mel~
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I believe this is a self descriptive poem of the features a person understands about ones self. It has a nice flow of words especially on the second reading. I like the word choice. It should stand a good chance in the prompt. Good luck. ~Mel~
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever title and description for starters, as well as housing temporary... headed for cemetery; good rhyme consciousness/pompousness (also apt!) Cheers. LIZ
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Clever title and description for starters, as well as housing temporary... headed for cemetery; good rhyme consciousness/pompousness (also apt!) Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 10-May-2020
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Many thanks... You're the first to comment on the intentional title...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Those first two lines say it all, don't they? We are only here on borrowed time, we will eventually swap our mortal home for the cemetery and then go on to our final home. The one thing we have in our short lives, is choice, and it's up to us to use them wisely. Unfortunately, for many, that realisation comes far too late. I enjoyed reading your poem, well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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Those first two lines say it all, don't they? We are only here on borrowed time, we will eventually swap our mortal home for the cemetery and then go on to our final home. The one thing we have in our short lives, is choice, and it's up to us to use them wisely. Unfortunately, for many, that realisation comes far too late. I enjoyed reading your poem, well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment from royowen
Beautifully written my friend, written in iambic tetrameter, and excellent Feminine rhymes, and deftly written with a great narrative and a very smooth, articulate theme, and I'm most impressed, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion : headed for the cometary,
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Beautifully written my friend, written in iambic tetrameter, and excellent Feminine rhymes, and deftly written with a great narrative and a very smooth, articulate theme, and I'm most impressed, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion : headed for the cometary,
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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welcome
Comment from richie b
I am impressed with you poem, spirituality overcomes
physicality. Your poem is intelligent and creative. The body
houses the soul and the soul houses eternity.
Thank you for a very fine poem.
Peace,
Richie
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I am impressed with you poem, spirituality overcomes
physicality. Your poem is intelligent and creative. The body
houses the soul and the soul houses eternity.
Thank you for a very fine poem.
Peace,
Richie
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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