Belle of the Garden
2 4 6 8 Syllable Poem14 total reviews
Comment from January L'Angelle
Beautiful poem. I like the softness that i feel from this poem. it is very pretty. It will do very well in the contest. I like the picture that you chose to represent the poem too. -January L
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Beautiful poem. I like the softness that i feel from this poem. it is very pretty. It will do very well in the contest. I like the picture that you chose to represent the poem too. -January L
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Well-done poem. You've presented a common theme--a pretty flower--in an unusual way. I love the line about the ladybug! Also effective use of the consonance with the letter "l" throughout the poem.
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Well-done poem. You've presented a common theme--a pretty flower--in an unusual way. I love the line about the ladybug! Also effective use of the consonance with the letter "l" throughout the poem.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-6-8, Belle of the Garden, has the right set up and reflects this loving relationship as the flower bursts with love and the beetle siphons off life.
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This 2-4-6-8, Belle of the Garden, has the right set up and reflects this loving relationship as the flower bursts with love and the beetle siphons off life.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Aww a very nice poem! The picture enhances your poem totally. I love ladybugs too but, I've never had a ladybug kiss me! LOL However, I have and do enjoy butterfly kisses!!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Aww a very nice poem! The picture enhances your poem totally. I love ladybugs too but, I've never had a ladybug kiss me! LOL However, I have and do enjoy butterfly kisses!!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Joan E.
You were either inspired by this artwork or were very lucky to find such a parallel picture! I enjoyed your personification of the flower and the use of alliteration. Best wishes in the 2-4-6-8 Poem contest- Joan
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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You were either inspired by this artwork or were very lucky to find such a parallel picture! I enjoyed your personification of the flower and the use of alliteration. Best wishes in the 2-4-6-8 Poem contest- Joan
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaaah, love the personification and feminine touch to this one... Such a wonderful offering for the contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
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Aaaaaah, love the personification and feminine touch to this one... Such a wonderful offering for the contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 2-4-6-8 Poem writing prompt contest. Your syllables count is correct. The presentation is good. Well done, I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 2-4-6-8 Poem writing prompt contest. Your syllables count is correct. The presentation is good. Well done, I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from SS. Anjum
This is such a warm philosophical poetry.....i love the title most and the first two verses amazingly describes the flower!......adjectives are such appropriately used....wish u luck
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This is such a warm philosophical poetry.....i love the title most and the first two verses amazingly describes the flower!......adjectives are such appropriately used....wish u luck
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Ogden
I see the ladybug doing the smooching, but nothing that looks like a woman in red. Maybe a pudding or a bundt cake. Would I understand the poem if I knew what the bug is kissing?
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I see the ladybug doing the smooching, but nothing that looks like a woman in red. Maybe a pudding or a bundt cake. Would I understand the poem if I knew what the bug is kissing?
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Lol It's the heart of a poppy. Sorry for the confusion. I should probably clarify it somehow - it does look like a bundt cake! Thanks for dropping by to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine nature write, vibrant red images here with romantic kisses and much like a valentines gift dressed in petals, a fine talented write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This is a fine nature write, vibrant red images here with romantic kisses and much like a valentines gift dressed in petals, a fine talented write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thank you!
