Heal My Heart
2-4-6-8 poem: Your words overcome my fears.15 total reviews
Comment from Rmocruz
You have effectively employed the writing prompt 2-4-6-8 format.
Your well-penned words read like a free flowing sentence.
This lover's theme is a promising contest entry.
Best wishes!
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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You have effectively employed the writing prompt 2-4-6-8 format.
Your well-penned words read like a free flowing sentence.
This lover's theme is a promising contest entry.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Vanny
A harden heart must be protected by walls that was built over time , and those bricks must be layered very thick in your heart.
My friend we all have walls in our hearts. Yes we all need healing and some one can come and help you to heal your wounds but you have to start to let go of the past and let love in your heart or the past hurts will always effect your life. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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A harden heart must be protected by walls that was built over time , and those bricks must be layered very thick in your heart.
My friend we all have walls in our hearts. Yes we all need healing and some one can come and help you to heal your wounds but you have to start to let go of the past and let love in your heart or the past hurts will always effect your life. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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That is very wise advice. Thanks for reviewing my poem!
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Thank you ..for writing..
Comment from dmt1967
I like the picture and the tenderness of this poem gives my heart that warm glow that only love poems can bring. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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I like the picture and the tenderness of this poem gives my heart that warm glow that only love poems can bring. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
You have this marked as General Poetry when it should truly be marked as Romance! :) And what a lovely romantic offering it is to demonstrate such a connection between two hearts: love and nurturing each other! ;) Best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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You have this marked as General Poetry when it should truly be marked as Romance! :) And what a lovely romantic offering it is to demonstrate such a connection between two hearts: love and nurturing each other! ;) Best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thanks for your comments. I sometimes forget about that classification menu. Thanks for the reminder - I changed it.
Comment from Earl Corp
Very nice poem which could have served as a romance poetry contest entry. Your poem looks like it could serve as a poster or even a greeting card. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Very nice poem which could have served as a romance poetry contest entry. Your poem looks like it could serve as a poster or even a greeting card. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thanks for your comments... yes, it could make a nice card. I wonder if Hallmark would like to give me thousands of $$ for the idea, haha.
