Changes
Winds of change37 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your well-deserved win. This is elegant==fresh imagery==wind both literal re hair and metaphorical re life==brilliant use of tousle! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Congrats on your well-deserved win. This is elegant==fresh imagery==wind both literal re hair and metaphorical re life==brilliant use of tousle! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review, Liz. It means so much.
I can't resist you any longer. Your constant kindness and sincere compliments have made me clean out my FanStory base and make way for the new. I promise to catch up with you soon. I'm on a writing vacation right now. See ya soon.
Sal xoxo
Comment from dragonpoet
Sally,
This poem is short but tells a full story of how lives storm can change your life. The poem seems to be written from the picture.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Sally,
This poem is short but tells a full story of how lives storm can change your life. The poem seems to be written from the picture.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thank you, dear Joan. I wish I was able to do what you do. Your kind well-wishing made my contest win all the more special. Thanks for taking the time. :))
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
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Don't mention it, Sally. Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Dear Contest Committee,
Thank you very much for this wonderful recognition and seven star rating. I am honored. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a great metaphor and simile. The alliteration especially s's and some of the words effect the sensory experience of the wind. The imagery play a movie through the readers imagination. This is quite brilliant with your skill using the figures of speech. I have to give you A+
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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This is a great metaphor and simile. The alliteration especially s's and some of the words effect the sensory experience of the wind. The imagery play a movie through the readers imagination. This is quite brilliant with your skill using the figures of speech. I have to give you A+
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the outstanding review and generous stars, dear Liz. I really liked this and hope it wins. It came upon me suddenly. I wrote it in five minutes, if that. I wish everything came as natural as this. Fresh from my life....
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Elon Vaughn
Love the word tousled. Seems like it always refers to hair. I also like Cat Stevens, which tells me that you must be somewhere between 68 and 72. I really like this piece.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Love the word tousled. Seems like it always refers to hair. I also like Cat Stevens, which tells me that you must be somewhere between 68 and 72. I really like this piece.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed my four line poem. You are an insightful one. Yes, I'll be 65 soon. I have loved Cat Stevens since I can remember. I'm so honored you thought this six worthy, Elon.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Gert sherwood
Sally Law
Your four line poem is so powerful of how winds can change the out come of your life yet to come.
I can see why your poem is one of the all time best.
Gert
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Sally Law
Your four line poem is so powerful of how winds can change the out come of your life yet to come.
I can see why your poem is one of the all time best.
Gert
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Wow, thank you, Hert. I hope the contest judges agree. At this point, I delighted Ive had so many compliments on this one. Your is so appreciated and encouraging.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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Smiles Sally Law you are welcome.
Gert
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And it's usually one of those winds that just comes out of nowhere, yeah?! ;) Such a wonderful offering of metaphorical truth, Lady Sal -- love the depth and silhouette that allows the reader to fill in their own 'wind' to the offering! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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And it's usually one of those winds that just comes out of nowhere, yeah?! ;) Such a wonderful offering of metaphorical truth, Lady Sal -- love the depth and silhouette that allows the reader to fill in their own 'wind' to the offering! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments, dear one. I'm glad you enjoyed this and application within. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I feel this on so many levels. I've never thought about my hair being a representation of my life but you're not wrong. You did a great job and I'm sure many can relate.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I feel this on so many levels. I've never thought about my hair being a representation of my life but you're not wrong. You did a great job and I'm sure many can relate.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you, Megan dear. Your kind reviews mean so much to me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Oh! Been there. Done that! I love this little four liner. Says a bit about me in the 70's. Highly relatable. Great photo choice! I do recall thinking that I thought I was stressed at THAT age and now I think about it and laugh. THIS is what stress is. AND, I know it could get worse. FAITH is the key. Great job with this one! Love it!
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Oh! Been there. Done that! I love this little four liner. Says a bit about me in the 70's. Highly relatable. Great photo choice! I do recall thinking that I thought I was stressed at THAT age and now I think about it and laugh. THIS is what stress is. AND, I know it could get worse. FAITH is the key. Great job with this one! Love it!
Wendy
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Faith is the key. Sharing some of my deep soul these days. I hope it's not too alarming. So glad you could relate. Sending you my best today as always, Wendy dear.
Sally xoxoxo
Comment from poetwatch
Those wild winds came from the north where change started to begin, Sally. It has changed our way of life, for when the wind blows leaves fly off the tree and land in our neighbors yard. :) This is a good offering for the Four line Poetry contest. Take care of yourself and your loved ones.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Those wild winds came from the north where change started to begin, Sally. It has changed our way of life, for when the wind blows leaves fly off the tree and land in our neighbors yard. :) This is a good offering for the Four line Poetry contest. Take care of yourself and your loved ones.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you very much, dear poet. I'm glad you enjoyed my contest entry. I'm bearing my deepest soul in some of my newer poems. Sending you my best today as always, Sally sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
