Cosmos
5-7-5 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Ignatius Albright
A good general idea. Sticks to the prompt wonderfully in terms of syllable count.
I feel like the wording could have been stronger but overall it's a good poem.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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A good general idea. Sticks to the prompt wonderfully in terms of syllable count.
I feel like the wording could have been stronger but overall it's a good poem.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Quick, if something crosses Mars in your field of view, you might want to report it to a higher authority "cuz it ain't natural"... LOL! ;) A fun offering for the contest, anon - thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Quick, if something crosses Mars in your field of view, you might want to report it to a higher authority "cuz it ain't natural"... LOL! ;) A fun offering for the contest, anon - thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I do love astronomy, so this is really interesting to me. It also sounds really good. It flows well, the whole poem. Very nice job with this 5-7-5 poem.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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I do love astronomy, so this is really interesting to me. It also sounds really good. It flows well, the whole poem. Very nice job with this 5-7-5 poem.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
