It's a Wondrous World
5/7/5 poem contest entry (not haiku)9 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Innocence always makes things wondrous - there is no overlay of hostility or double-dealing - just simple appreciation and gratitude. Children know it, and animals know it... as captured in your lovely little poem, well deserving of its top placing finish. That graphic is delightful!
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Innocence always makes things wondrous - there is no overlay of hostility or double-dealing - just simple appreciation and gratitude. Children know it, and animals know it... as captured in your lovely little poem, well deserving of its top placing finish. That graphic is delightful!
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, It's a Wondrous World, has the right set up and imagines all we ever knew as seen for the first time again. Our awe would ever diminish with life's repetition.
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This 5-7-5, It's a Wondrous World, has the right set up and imagines all we ever knew as seen for the first time again. Our awe would ever diminish with life's repetition.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Oh, how the beauty of the world is captured in just three lines! If only we can all live together with innocent minds of children the world would really be a wonderful place for everyone. However, I can't connect the innocence of pets. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Oh, how the beauty of the world is captured in just three lines! If only we can all live together with innocent minds of children the world would really be a wonderful place for everyone. However, I can't connect the innocence of pets. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you. When you give four stars it means it needs work, what's wrong with it? So I may improve it.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely, delightful poem about the innocence of children, their perceptions of the world, and the importance of their pet friends.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely, delightful poem about the innocence of children, their perceptions of the world, and the importance of their pet friends.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from smileycloud
My little heart starting beating faster reading this truthful and endearing poem
so lovely and I feel so much happier after seeing this piece
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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My little heart starting beating faster reading this truthful and endearing poem
so lovely and I feel so much happier after seeing this piece
have a smiley day
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and six stars.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is really lovely. Beautiful picture, simple text, matching perfectly. Nothing needs changing. Bravo!
Thank you so much for the opportunity to view your art!
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This is really lovely. Beautiful picture, simple text, matching perfectly. Nothing needs changing. Bravo!
Thank you so much for the opportunity to view your art!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
I'm a succor for those pair of eyes, the kitten's and the boy's - so I am being lured into giving you a rating of five. I live these words every day.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I'm a succor for those pair of eyes, the kitten's and the boy's - so I am being lured into giving you a rating of five. I live these words every day.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from zanya
Ah-h what a lovely moment in time captured forever in these words of the short format of the 5-7-5 - the here and now through the eyes of an innocent child
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Ah-h what a lovely moment in time captured forever in these words of the short format of the 5-7-5 - the here and now through the eyes of an innocent child
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you very much for your review 😊
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, Anon, such an awesome offering that just exudes the innocence of a child and the wonders of the world not through but in their eyes!! ;) Best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Oh, Anon, such an awesome offering that just exudes the innocence of a child and the wonders of the world not through but in their eyes!! ;) Best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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thank you very much, Yvette :)
