Safe With You
God has our back...9 total reviews
Comment from Caitriona
I really like this poem. It was an easy read and clear on the point that God is always near and taking care of us. Thank you for writing this and good luck! C.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I really like this poem. It was an easy read and clear on the point that God is always near and taking care of us. Thank you for writing this and good luck! C.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review...it made me smile.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I like the twist on I am, I am because He is. I love the image! (I wrote a book, In God's Hands) Each couplet expresses a complete, important thought, with a rhyme and meter that flow easily. I like the poem.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I like the twist on I am, I am because He is. I love the image! (I wrote a book, In God's Hands) Each couplet expresses a complete, important thought, with a rhyme and meter that flow easily. I like the poem.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Your book sounds interesting. Where can I purchase it? Thank you for this great review.
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In God's Hands by Darlene Franklin available at https://www.amazon.com/Gods-Hands-inspirational-gift-poetry-ebook/dp/B0861MMPKC/ Thanks for your interest!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this and the powerful message conveyed in it. We are what we are because of Him. He is indeed as close to us as our next breath. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I really like this and the powerful message conveyed in it. We are what we are because of Him. He is indeed as close to us as our next breath. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words. It's always great to hear from you.
Comment from AprilViolet
Love this poem! It's hard to say much with only six lines but somehow you managed to accomplish this! Good luck in the contest! You have my vote!!! :) :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Love this poem! It's hard to say much with only six lines but somehow you managed to accomplish this! Good luck in the contest! You have my vote!!! :) :)
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you for this lovely 6 star review. :)
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a wonderful "I AM" poem. The rhymes are used properly and the poem flows so well. I enjoyed reading of The Lord's love. Good luck in the contest. This will do very well. -January L.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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This is a wonderful "I AM" poem. The rhymes are used properly and the poem flows so well. I enjoyed reading of The Lord's love. Good luck in the contest. This will do very well. -January L.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you for taking time to read my poem, and for this nice review.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I really liked this. It was short but sweet, rhymed, and shows your gratitude for what you have. Keep up the good writing. I would have made the topic spiritual, though.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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I really liked this. It was short but sweet, rhymed, and shows your gratitude for what you have. Keep up the good writing. I would have made the topic spiritual, though.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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I guess this felt spiritual to me, thank you for this great review.
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I meant the topic of the poem, when you have to select it in the box. I wasn't saying it wasn't spiritual. Sorry for the confusion.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this is just a perfect offering for this contest! :) Well rhymed and wonderful rhythm in your powerful testimony - the reader can't help but smile!! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Oh, this is just a perfect offering for this contest! :) Well rhymed and wonderful rhythm in your powerful testimony - the reader can't help but smile!! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and this nice review.
Comment from Paul Volkmer
Wonderful! I love how well the piece flowed. So easy to read and what a joy! We all need a bit of this right now. The third and fourth lines were my favorite. Such a wonderful selection of words.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Wonderful! I love how well the piece flowed. So easy to read and what a joy! We all need a bit of this right now. The third and fourth lines were my favorite. Such a wonderful selection of words.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and your kind words.
Comment from Von S. Bourland
This is a beautiful poem! It doesn't always take a lot of words to say a lot. You have written a succinct, delightful, enriching poem. I hope to see more work by you in the future. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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This is a beautiful poem! It doesn't always take a lot of words to say a lot. You have written a succinct, delightful, enriching poem. I hope to see more work by you in the future. Keep writing!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and for your kind words.
