As The Day Winds Down
Summer Haiku For Contest14 total reviews
Comment from SS. Anjum
Good haiku poem.....sunset is an attractive scene of nature......its the time where many activities of living bodies come to rest.....enjoyed your poetry.....good day
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Good haiku poem.....sunset is an attractive scene of nature......its the time where many activities of living bodies come to rest.....enjoyed your poetry.....good day
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is an excellent haiku, illustrated well. Art is perfect for your words and for your theme of end of day. Another thing, "sunflowers silently droop" and "grandma nods in peace" go together well. In seniors the term which you may have heard called "sundowning" means that oldsters lose their ability to remember or have vibrancy--thus droop. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This is an excellent haiku, illustrated well. Art is perfect for your words and for your theme of end of day. Another thing, "sunflowers silently droop" and "grandma nods in peace" go together well. In seniors the term which you may have heard called "sundowning" means that oldsters lose their ability to remember or have vibrancy--thus droop. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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It was intuitive, I never heard of that saying before.
Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is as perfect as it comes. What else to say here. Outstanding photo melds as one with the text. Author obviously has inner understanding of this art form. Wouldn't change a thing.
Thank you for the opportunity to view your art.
Well done!
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reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This is as perfect as it comes. What else to say here. Outstanding photo melds as one with the text. Author obviously has inner understanding of this art form. Wouldn't change a thing.
Thank you for the opportunity to view your art.
Well done!
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I love this because both Grandma and the sunflowers seem to be going to sleep together. Great imagery here as well. I really appreciate this haiku. Good luck, and keep writing.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I love this because both Grandma and the sunflowers seem to be going to sleep together. Great imagery here as well. I really appreciate this haiku. Good luck, and keep writing.
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you very much, Amanda :)
