Lore of the West
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Twenty Was Plenty"A collection of western stories and poems.
3 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
Great writing my friend! :)
I found this very interesting and it made me curious to know why you called this Twenty Was Plenty. I am sneaking this read in at work this morning. Hee-hee! I feel lost not posting on FanStory. My schedule is crazy now. But I'm glad I caught your short story. I love anything to do with a sheriff, gunslingers and detectives. I like how this ended. Clever girl!
Hopefully, I will find time to post and read more here. This is a great site and I love all the talented writers such as yourself.
Stay safe!
Hugs from Arkansas,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Great writing my friend! :)
I found this very interesting and it made me curious to know why you called this Twenty Was Plenty. I am sneaking this read in at work this morning. Hee-hee! I feel lost not posting on FanStory. My schedule is crazy now. But I'm glad I caught your short story. I love anything to do with a sheriff, gunslingers and detectives. I like how this ended. Clever girl!
Hopefully, I will find time to post and read more here. This is a great site and I love all the talented writers such as yourself.
Stay safe!
Hugs from Arkansas,
Shana :)
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much, Shana, for all the stars. My best to you in your rewrites of your great novels.
Hugs, from here in Texas,
Faye
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A short story about a man they nicknamed after his death to write on his tombstone. I can see that it is unusual. Of course, it made the pastor curious. The tale is told in a real short story. Rather well done, congratulations! And good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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A short story about a man they nicknamed after his death to write on his tombstone. I can see that it is unusual. Of course, it made the pastor curious. The tale is told in a real short story. Rather well done, congratulations! And good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you. I greatly appreciate your review and your comments. And I really need the good luck so that is also welcome.
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Welcome
Comment from humpwhistle
I remember Lorne Greene's recitation of Ringo.
Nice use of dialogue.
I was certain the pastor was going to turn out to be Twenty's brother, or something like that.
You are missing several quotation marks, and, in the first paragraph you write 'enters in'--no need for the 'in'. Hope this helps.
Good luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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I remember Lorne Greene's recitation of Ringo.
Nice use of dialogue.
I was certain the pastor was going to turn out to be Twenty's brother, or something like that.
You are missing several quotation marks, and, in the first paragraph you write 'enters in'--no need for the 'in'. Hope this helps.
Good luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you. I must have overlooked them in my preview. Will change.