Making Up Is Not So Hard to Do
A Colorful Love Letter (Sort Of)15 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oh, my head this is so perfect:
Do you imagine that I'm blue without you?
Not true!
Or that, instead, I'm seeing red?
Who said?
You're being just as good as gold --
So I'm told.
And I myself am in the pink.
I think.
The thing is, I'm no longer mad.
Orange you glad?
I have no words, this is the perfect description for when you feel blue:)
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Oh, my head this is so perfect:
Do you imagine that I'm blue without you?
Not true!
Or that, instead, I'm seeing red?
Who said?
You're being just as good as gold --
So I'm told.
And I myself am in the pink.
I think.
The thing is, I'm no longer mad.
Orange you glad?
I have no words, this is the perfect description for when you feel blue:)
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks for the kind words. This was fun to write.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your colorful poem. Your lines read well with good rhymes. I like the way you used color words to express your thoughts and feelings. I like the play on the word orange. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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I enjoyed your colorful poem. Your lines read well with good rhymes. I like the way you used color words to express your thoughts and feelings. I like the play on the word orange. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You've done a great job in describing emotions with color. I have never thought of passion or emotion compared with colors. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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You've done a great job in describing emotions with color. I have never thought of passion or emotion compared with colors. Well done!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you so much.
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray you are well, as well as your family. I like your imagery with the five colorful flowers. Your title reflects the sentiments of your message, "Making Up Is Not So Hard to Do." I love how you used your two colors, red and orange to share in your poem how making up isn't hard. This is a cute and humorous poem. Well written and an enjoyable read. Also, I like your rhyming words. Good job. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hello,
I pray you are well, as well as your family. I like your imagery with the five colorful flowers. Your title reflects the sentiments of your message, "Making Up Is Not So Hard to Do." I love how you used your two colors, red and orange to share in your poem how making up isn't hard. This is a cute and humorous poem. Well written and an enjoyable read. Also, I like your rhyming words. Good job. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you and best wishes?
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from SS. Anjum
Nice twisted poetry. You have matched the picture intelligently with your poem. I like the way you have used each color to describe the feeling or emotion according to the mood in the poem.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Nice twisted poetry. You have matched the picture intelligently with your poem. I like the way you have used each color to describe the feeling or emotion according to the mood in the poem.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thanks for reading and for the kind words.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Making Up Is Not So Hard to Do
Hello my friend
An interesting poem entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt contest. I like how you used colors to describe emotions.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Making Up Is Not So Hard to Do
Hello my friend
An interesting poem entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt contest. I like how you used colors to describe emotions.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Well done! This is a charming piece. It has certainly met the contest requirements in a very delightful way. Although you have used all of the colors, it does not come across as a forced use of the descriptive adjectives. You did a great job using the prompt in a very creative way.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Well done! This is a charming piece. It has certainly met the contest requirements in a very delightful way. Although you have used all of the colors, it does not come across as a forced use of the descriptive adjectives. You did a great job using the prompt in a very creative way.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well you included plenty of colour into emotions here and you made me smile as this is ideal for the contest, I wish you luck and I hope you stay in the pink and don't see red! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Well you included plenty of colour into emotions here and you made me smile as this is ideal for the contest, I wish you luck and I hope you stay in the pink and don't see red! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is cute, clever, sweet, and well thought out. I think that the flowers are as you've so eloquently stated a way that some use to make up. The last line is priceless. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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This is cute, clever, sweet, and well thought out. I think that the flowers are as you've so eloquently stated a way that some use to make up. The last line is priceless. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short colorful poem to let your lover know you are ready to make up and offering a very colorful presentation to convince him to forgive and forget the past.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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A very well-written short colorful poem to let your lover know you are ready to make up and offering a very colorful presentation to convince him to forgive and forget the past.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for your comments.
