Come Fly A Kite With Me
5-7-5 My love is soaring high.22 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Love the whimsy and the wordplay re tethers and tugging on (heart)strings. Wonderful imagery--ribbon of delight. I enjoyed this uplifting verse. Cheers. LIZ
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Love the whimsy and the wordplay re tethers and tugging on (heart)strings. Wonderful imagery--ribbon of delight. I enjoyed this uplifting verse. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 12-May-2020
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like the pretty 't' alliteration in the verbs 'tethers' and 'tugging' as emphasized words in this 5-7-5. And of course there is the implied metaphor that strings on a heart and kite are made of the same stuff. Nice share with photo choice, too.
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I like the pretty 't' alliteration in the verbs 'tethers' and 'tugging' as emphasized words in this 5-7-5. And of course there is the implied metaphor that strings on a heart and kite are made of the same stuff. Nice share with photo choice, too.
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Comment Written 12-May-2020
