The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Cyber-Highway Signs?"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed reading this poem, it has a nice feel to it and flows well. I particularly enjoyed the imagery and the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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I enjoyed reading this poem, it has a nice feel to it and flows well. I particularly enjoyed the imagery and the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you for the time to read and review this poem offering.
Blessings to you and have a Great week.
Comment from Vanna1
Mixed feelings about this piece. But I can tell you put in a lot of effort. Goes off topic a bit but maybe that is what you wanted. I am no expert. First and second stanza are good and go nicely with the image.
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Mixed feelings about this piece. But I can tell you put in a lot of effort. Goes off topic a bit but maybe that is what you wanted. I am no expert. First and second stanza are good and go nicely with the image.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you for your time to read and review this poem offering.
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Sorry maybe I should have put four stars I am new to the site can I change it?