Light at the End
1-6-1 poem entry14 total reviews
Comment from JLR
Great, 1-6-1 to pull off three rhythms in 7 words and have perfect clarity in the message is an achievement that is noteworthy, great success in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Great, 1-6-1 to pull off three rhythms in 7 words and have perfect clarity in the message is an achievement that is noteworthy, great success in the voting booth.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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I?m glad you enjoyed this short piece. I find them more difficult to write!
Comment from suep
I didn't see this until after the contest was ended, but I really love your
1-6-1! A well-written poem that's inspiring and with a beautiful presentation. Great job!
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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I didn't see this until after the contest was ended, but I really love your
1-6-1! A well-written poem that's inspiring and with a beautiful presentation. Great job!
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1 poem, Light at the End, has the proper formatting and reminds the reader that the end of the tunnel is the beginning of something better.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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This 1-6-1 poem, Light at the End, has the proper formatting and reminds the reader that the end of the tunnel is the beginning of something better.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights!
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is very pretty and has a good message, Hope is well within our scope, Cope Very uplifting! The picture is fabulous as well! Great job! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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This is very pretty and has a good message, Hope is well within our scope, Cope Very uplifting! The picture is fabulous as well! Great job! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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So that you liked this piece!
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Lovely entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines with nice flow. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Hello my friend
Lovely entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines with nice flow. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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So that you liked this piece!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise words here as we all deal with our problems in our own way and some cope and some hope and some have both, food for thought there, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Wise words here as we all deal with our problems in our own way and some cope and some hope and some have both, food for thought there, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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So that you liked this piece!
Comment from Ignatius Albright
Very nicely done you have executed the directive perfectly and the subject matter really speaks to me and I'm sure a lot of other people.
Thank you sharing, good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Very nicely done you have executed the directive perfectly and the subject matter really speaks to me and I'm sure a lot of other people.
Thank you sharing, good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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So that you liked this piece!
Comment from w.j.debi
It is so delightful to read your positive words. There is light at the end of the tunnel. All things pass and so will our current situation.
The artwork you chose is perfect and gives a sense of confidence that life continues.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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It is so delightful to read your positive words. There is light at the end of the tunnel. All things pass and so will our current situation.
The artwork you chose is perfect and gives a sense of confidence that life continues.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I think this is absolutely true. Onnnnn the other hand... we don't have many other options, do we? *smile*
This is a nice poem that meets all the requirements of the contest. Good luck!
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I think this is absolutely true. Onnnnn the other hand... we don't have many other options, do we? *smile*
This is a nice poem that meets all the requirements of the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-May-2020
Comment from January L'Angelle
Poems about hope are always a good thing. To have hope is to have faith and thats amazing and wonderful. I like this 161. You did it well and followed all the rules. Well penned. -January L.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Poems about hope are always a good thing. To have hope is to have faith and thats amazing and wonderful. I like this 161. You did it well and followed all the rules. Well penned. -January L.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
