Shifting Sands
a Sonnet24 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What an excellent post Melissa, a superb entry in this sonnet contes my friend. Great flow, smooth as silk. The theme is not thought of very much, when I perceive I'm just as vulnerable under close scrutiny as anyone, so how can I judge another when I'm like this? Beautifully written my friend, a wonderful post, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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What an excellent post Melissa, a superb entry in this sonnet contes my friend. Great flow, smooth as silk. The theme is not thought of very much, when I perceive I'm just as vulnerable under close scrutiny as anyone, so how can I judge another when I'm like this? Beautifully written my friend, a wonderful post, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thanks so much Roy! I really appreciate your insightful review! Hugs!
Melissa
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Well done
Comment from Drew Delaney
Very nice! It's about the mundane life of the past before Covid19 appeared on the scene and the life we have to work with now and as we move forward. Best wishes in the contest!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Very nice! It's about the mundane life of the past before Covid19 appeared on the scene and the life we have to work with now and as we move forward. Best wishes in the contest!
Drew xx
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thanks so much Drew! I really appreciate your insightful review! Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! Super job with your sonnet, in which I love your profound philosophical reflection in this. Yes, we are always on edge when life shakes up the mundane world that we are used to and feel secure in. And lately, we have to seek new norms and your words are so fitting for our world today where we don't know what to expect for even the near future.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Wow! Super job with your sonnet, in which I love your profound philosophical reflection in this. Yes, we are always on edge when life shakes up the mundane world that we are used to and feel secure in. And lately, we have to seek new norms and your words are so fitting for our world today where we don't know what to expect for even the near future.
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Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thanks so much Helen! I really appreciate your insightful review! Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
A thoughtful Sonnet, deep and rich with abstracts. I loved this one and hatenthat I am short on sixes. So outstanding and a strong connection tender for the
contest. Beautifully written and illustrated, dear Melissa.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal xoxo
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reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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A thoughtful Sonnet, deep and rich with abstracts. I loved this one and hatenthat I am short on sixes. So outstanding and a strong connection tender for the
contest. Beautifully written and illustrated, dear Melissa.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal xoxo
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Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thanks so much Sally! I really appreciate your insightful review! Hugs!
Melissa
