Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I love spiders which affectionately call spidies. Some would sadly not agree that this is a brilliant image. Speaking of webs, have tou ever seen the one I call a zig zag web? There is one zig zag design somewhere in their web. It looks like they used the zig zag attachment from a sewing machine. I also love your use of alliteration with the s's. They effect the quietness & wonder we experience being around such creative art.

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Thanks for a most interesting review - have never seen a zig-zag web- but it's always so enlightening to share views

reply by Liz O'Neill on 23-May-2020

I found this link...very interesting. It's a writer who honors spiders:

http://baddestmotherever.com/2014/10/15/the-writing-spider/

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

They always look magical in the morning dew like that!! ;) A great offering for this limited format contest today! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Thanks for an encouraging review - Nature is so active at this time of year zanya

Comment from Diana Kane

Excellent

Nice! Spiders are not really my favorite thing but I do admit that sometimes the webs in the morning do with the sunlight can be quite beautiful. I enjoyed this.

 Comment Written 18-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Yes indeed - Nature is wonderful at this time of year zanya

Comment from richie b

Excellent

Your poem creates imagery of discovering a
spider spinning its web. We become spectators,
lost in this magical construction.
Your poem is well written, best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b

 Comment Written 18-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

I like your view - thanks for sharing zanya