Justified By Faith
a contest entry28 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
That pretty much covers it. Simple, easy to follow and understand and the image goes along with the poem nicely. Can't say much more. Good Job...Did it take very long to come up with the idea?
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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That pretty much covers it. Simple, easy to follow and understand and the image goes along with the poem nicely. Can't say much more. Good Job...Did it take very long to come up with the idea?
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay safe
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Ben Colder
Very much so. By fath, not by works least any man should boast. The gift we have through our faith in Christ. My best to you in the contest. Excellent poem. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Very much so. By fath, not by works least any man should boast. The gift we have through our faith in Christ. My best to you in the contest. Excellent poem. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Ben,
I am grateful for your review and very wise comments. Thanks so much for the best wishes.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I thought this was a very well written spiritual poem. I think what your poem also highlights is how important faith is and how it has survived generations before us. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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I thought this was a very well written spiritual poem. I think what your poem also highlights is how important faith is and how it has survived generations before us. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Jacob,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Janet Foor
A excellent spiritual 5/7/5 poem for the contest. Two lines grammatically connected and an exceptional satori line to complete the thought.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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A excellent spiritual 5/7/5 poem for the contest. Two lines grammatically connected and an exceptional satori line to complete the thought.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Janet,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent piece of poetry. You are highly creative and it makes the message special especially through your presentation. Well structured stanzas and fair image. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Hi, excellent piece of poetry. You are highly creative and it makes the message special especially through your presentation. Well structured stanzas and fair image. Keep it up!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
We are so blessed that One would be willing to take our sins upon Himself and be tortured, nailed with spikes to a cross, bleed, die a horrendous death, and be raised on the third day as the sacrifice in our behalf, so our sins can be forgiven.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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We are so blessed that One would be willing to take our sins upon Himself and be tortured, nailed with spikes to a cross, bleed, die a horrendous death, and be raised on the third day as the sacrifice in our behalf, so our sins can be forgiven.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Rebecca,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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You're welcome.
Comment from smileycloud
a very highly positive poem
says an awful lot of truthfullness in just 17 sylls
Romans is one of my favourite NT books and I particularly love Romans 8
a fine entry in the contest
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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a very highly positive poem
says an awful lot of truthfullness in just 17 sylls
Romans is one of my favourite NT books and I particularly love Romans 8
a fine entry in the contest
have a smiley day
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Alchera
A well written 5/7/5 writing prompt entry which follows correctly its syllables counting, fixing its poetical faith narrative story in three verses as required by the contest rules. I do like it.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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A well written 5/7/5 writing prompt entry which follows correctly its syllables counting, fixing its poetical faith narrative story in three verses as required by the contest rules. I do like it.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Alchera,
Thank you kindly for your review and comments. Stay safe...
Blessings...Portia
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You are Always welcomed, pharp! Blessings from Italy. Tony
Comment from royowen
Oh, yes, Abraham is the father of faith, the one who remained the the first of his kind, who offered to offer up his son, until constrained by an angel, being a model of God giving His Son as our propitiation. Beautifully written dear friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Oh, yes, Abraham is the father of faith, the one who remained the the first of his kind, who offered to offer up his son, until constrained by an angel, being a model of God giving His Son as our propitiation. Beautifully written dear friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Roy,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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Well done
Comment from Margaret Bednar
You have met the requirements of a 5-7-5. A small prayer of praise in a poem is always nice. These are the kinds of inspiring things to write on the sides of one's bible pages. Nice. Can find no fault.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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You have met the requirements of a 5-7-5. A small prayer of praise in a poem is always nice. These are the kinds of inspiring things to write on the sides of one's bible pages. Nice. Can find no fault.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.
