Comment from Vanny

Excellent

This poem is so beautiful. I love these words. Your poem makes me feel like the bird is talking to me. Thanks for sharing your poem. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-May-2020

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reply by the author on 20-May-2020

Thank you taking the time to read and your encouraging comments.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is an uplifting image that is becoming realized in Vermont. I like your choice of an onomatopoetic word. It is fun to read this poem aloud. I like to repeat the word "chirping." If you haven't, you should to see you chose the perfect word.

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Thank you for your review and comments.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a wonderful perspective of that morning birdsong!! ;) A great offering for this limited format contest today! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Thanks for your read, review and encouraging words.

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

I liked this well written short poem that is spiced with rhyming words and phonetic words. Good luck in the contest, keep writing and stay safe. Focusing on nature is a good break from thinking about the virus. Bill

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Thanks for your read, review and wish for safety. I wish the same for you.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

You captured the feeling of spring here very well, it flows well and has a nice feel to it. I Particularly Enjoyed the imagery you used. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Thank you for your read and review. Much appreciated.