Rest in peace
My reliable old friend6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
Well it's obvious that it wasn't just a car to you. You had a relationship. What did you name your car? Hang in there as you mourn the loss. Keep writing and Drive safe.Bill
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Well it's obvious that it wasn't just a car to you. You had a relationship. What did you name your car? Hang in there as you mourn the loss. Keep writing and Drive safe.Bill
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Many thanks Bill
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A good 5-7-5 senryu. The old car is personified by dying and going to the graveyard. I like that, it is an original thought and approach for the senryu. I can feel you were very attached to your old car. I can understand that. I drove a Fiat 500 for fifteen years!
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A good 5-7-5 senryu. The old car is personified by dying and going to the graveyard. I like that, it is an original thought and approach for the senryu. I can feel you were very attached to your old car. I can understand that. I drove a Fiat 500 for fifteen years!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Many thanks.
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very welcome.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest that everyone will experience someday, except those who trade cars in every coupe of years.
Those cars in the picture look mighty old.
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest that everyone will experience someday, except those who trade cars in every coupe of years.
Those cars in the picture look mighty old.
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thanks Robert for the great review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
When we lose an faithful object that carry us around the town it's a tragedy -
Get closer to the jungle...
I'm a Celebrity
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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When we lose an faithful object that carry us around the town it's a tragedy -
Get closer to the jungle...
I'm a Celebrity
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Many thanks Iza.
Comment from R.Peyregne
Oh my, I could feel this! I had a 1974 Chevy Vega that the floorboard actually rusted out in the backseat and I had to take it to the junkyard. I was heartbroken... Your words spoke to me. Thank you.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Oh my, I could feel this! I had a 1974 Chevy Vega that the floorboard actually rusted out in the backseat and I had to take it to the junkyard. I was heartbroken... Your words spoke to me. Thank you.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thanks for the lovely review
Comment from Diana Kane
Depending on how long you've had your car, this can be very traumatizing. It's like losing an old friend. Someone or something that triggers fond memories. Love this!
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Depending on how long you've had your car, this can be very traumatizing. It's like losing an old friend. Someone or something that triggers fond memories. Love this!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thanks for the lovely review.
