Spellbound
An Acrostic that will surprise some....51 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Spellbound
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Acrostic Poem writing prompt contest. I like how you use mataphor, the love of a boat or a woman. Good job my friend. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Spellbound
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Acrostic Poem writing prompt contest. I like how you use mataphor, the love of a boat or a woman. Good job my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Gypsy, thank you so much for your power of observation.
Comment from royowen
My, my. She must have been attractive, I can remember feeling a little like that when I was young, but not so much these days. Beautifully written, and expressed admirably in this great entry in this acrostic poem. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Typo : 2 : perfect (in every) symmetry Literally (hypotised) hypnotised?
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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My, my. She must have been attractive, I can remember feeling a little like that when I was young, but not so much these days. Beautifully written, and expressed admirably in this great entry in this acrostic poem. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Typo : 2 : perfect (in every) symmetry Literally (hypotised) hypnotised?
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Good catch thanks
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Well done
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, what a lovely image you have drawn with your words, of falling in love... at first sight. Whether with a person or not... love is love. ;) I know... I've been in love with an object before... I expect she has a name too? ;)
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Hello Author, what a lovely image you have drawn with your words, of falling in love... at first sight. Whether with a person or not... love is love. ;) I know... I've been in love with an object before... I expect she has a name too? ;)
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Spellbound is her name😄
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-Good formatting of
your acrostic, as well
as a good topic.
-If this is true, then
you definitely liked
this boat.
-The imagery is effective,
from the color of your eyes
to "landmines exploding in your head."
-My favorite one is
"B eauty that sat so buoyantly
taller than her peers."
-Very well written;
good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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-Very nice artwork.
-Good formatting of
your acrostic, as well
as a good topic.
-If this is true, then
you definitely liked
this boat.
-The imagery is effective,
from the color of your eyes
to "landmines exploding in your head."
-My favorite one is
"B eauty that sat so buoyantly
taller than her peers."
-Very well written;
good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thanks, Pam I sold her but we caught many good einds over the years.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from RodG
Although I have never had much interest in boats of any kind, I can relate to the Speaker in this poem who is absolutely enchanted by the 32-footer he sees at the pier. Who hasn't instantly fallen in love? In my case it was a '56 T-Bird convertible. Rod
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Although I have never had much interest in boats of any kind, I can relate to the Speaker in this poem who is absolutely enchanted by the 32-footer he sees at the pier. Who hasn't instantly fallen in love? In my case it was a '56 T-Bird convertible. Rod
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thanks Rod, My first love was a 1966 Dodge Charger 426 hemi
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Bam-Beam- Symmetry-Beauty - Frame - Pier yup it's an yacht:) I understand your enchantment, these "creatures" are majestic and beautiful like dolphins. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Bam-Beam- Symmetry-Beauty - Frame - Pier yup it's an yacht:) I understand your enchantment, these "creatures" are majestic and beautiful like dolphins. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Iza, you win the wink and th enid, smiling back!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about being spellbound of something beautiful that we always want to hold dear to our hearts and are able to enjoy it in our lives as long as we are here.
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A very well-written acrostic poem about being spellbound of something beautiful that we always want to hold dear to our hearts and are able to enjoy it in our lives as long as we are here.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your acrostic contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. You formatted your lines well. Your lines read smooth with great imagery. Of course you were describing the boat you had seen. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Your acrostic contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. You formatted your lines well. Your lines read smooth with great imagery. Of course you were describing the boat you had seen. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an excellent poem in every respecf. It is skillfully and creatively
written and vividly and dramatically descriptive. I would have been surprised if you hadn't included a picture of a boat. :-)
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This is an excellent poem in every respecf. It is skillfully and creatively
written and vividly and dramatically descriptive. I would have been surprised if you hadn't included a picture of a boat. :-)
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a good acrostic, but I have always thought these look better without the space after the first letter of each line. Either way, you have done well with the word you chose, so nicely done.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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This is a good acrostic, but I have always thought these look better without the space after the first letter of each line. Either way, you have done well with the word you chose, so nicely done.
Comment Written 21-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you
