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Young Writers

1-6-1 poem

4 total reviews 
Comment from Elon Vaughn
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I love the idea and wish it could be posted in classrooms to encourage young people to write.
Nice job following the 1-6-1 format, which I believe is a challenge. You met the challenge.

 Comment Written 27-May-2020


reply by the author on 27-May-2020
    So glad you enjoyed this piece!
reply by Elon Vaughn on 27-May-2020
    Welcome!
reply by Elon Vaughn on 28-May-2020
    You are welcome.
Comment from TheMissRed
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The English teacher in me loves your message in this simple poem. I appreciate your writer's note also. I could not agree more! Writing is an act of the heart and the mind both. Many young people do not realize this.

 Comment Written 27-May-2020


reply by the author on 27-May-2020
    So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written Rhyme that 1-6-1 poem you have penned for the prompt. You used very good words and very nice imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-May-2020


reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from tfawcus
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There is so much freshness in a child's view of the world and you are quite right in your suggestion that the expression of it should be encouraged. A great entry to this contest for a micro-poem!

 Comment Written 26-May-2020


reply by the author on 26-May-2020
    I find these short ones much more difficult to pen. Thanks for your insights - and congratulations on placing first in the sonnet contest! I really enjoyed that piece!
reply by tfawcus on 26-May-2020
    Thanks!