Summer Breeze
3-5-3 Contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your eleven syllables in this delightful piece, conveying a powerful message about how an element of nature--in this case, a breeze--can make us wax nostalgic.
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You have made excellent use of your eleven syllables in this delightful piece, conveying a powerful message about how an element of nature--in this case, a breeze--can make us wax nostalgic.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights- and for the generous rating! I?m glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Winds can bring up all sorts of memories, love included. They are an unseen force of nature.
This is a good entry for the 3-7-5 writing contests. Good luck.
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Winds can bring up all sorts of memories, love included. They are an unseen force of nature.
This is a good entry for the 3-7-5 writing contests. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
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I really did.
Comment from Megan3333
I love this poem and I love this font. The picture is also very interesting and beautiful. The font is prefect because it is like a summer breeze. I also like how you made it about love, that's always a good topic.
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I love this poem and I love this font. The picture is also very interesting and beautiful. The font is prefect because it is like a summer breeze. I also like how you made it about love, that's always a good topic.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mia Twysted
When the breeze picks up certain scents and blows through our hair it can reanimate a memory. Maybe the wind remembers such things and is reminding you of the special love you once shared. That is what I am left with after reading this piece.
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When the breeze picks up certain scents and blows through our hair it can reanimate a memory. Maybe the wind remembers such things and is reminding you of the special love you once shared. That is what I am left with after reading this piece.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your lovely sentiments !
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Summer Breeze, has the right set up and soothes the hot skin which needs the touch of another to ease memories back into the present.
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This 3-5-3, Summer Breeze, has the right set up and soothes the hot skin which needs the touch of another to ease memories back into the present.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insightful thoughts!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the summer breeze that reminds us from the love relationships of our youthful days and all the fun we had without cares about grownup things.
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the summer breeze that reminds us from the love relationships of our youthful days and all the fun we had without cares about grownup things.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Romance seems to be linked to summer, autumn with heartache, winter with the chill of loneliness and spring with hope of a new romance, your brought the scene here of love, love Dolly x
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Romance seems to be linked to summer, autumn with heartache, winter with the chill of loneliness and spring with hope of a new romance, your brought the scene here of love, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughtful comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Summer Breeze
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem contest. Beautiful presentation. Good syllable count. Lines well connected. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Summer Breeze
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem contest. Beautiful presentation. Good syllable count. Lines well connected. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt.
This short piece tells a clear story and uses the summer breeze as the 'air' component.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt.
This short piece tells a clear story and uses the summer breeze as the 'air' component.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was a nice use of the prompt. You have done well. Good luck with te contest. I liked how simple this one was. No improvements to suggest right now here.
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This was a nice use of the prompt. You have done well. Good luck with te contest. I liked how simple this one was. No improvements to suggest right now here.
Comment Written 28-May-2020
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Thank for sharing your insights,
