Summer Breeze
3-5-3 Contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from Lucy de Welles
All elements here. This is really beautiful! The colors in the beautiful art work saturate the soul. I caught my breath as the computer scrolled in picture into view. Text simple, lovely. Nothing to improve here.
Well done!
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reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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All elements here. This is really beautiful! The colors in the beautiful art work saturate the soul. I caught my breath as the computer scrolled in picture into view. Text simple, lovely. Nothing to improve here.
Well done!
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Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from RodG
Summer + warm breezes + plus magical sunsets = wonderful memories of one's first love. You can not convey it any better in 11 syllables than you did here. Rod
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reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Summer + warm breezes + plus magical sunsets = wonderful memories of one's first love. You can not convey it any better in 11 syllables than you did here. Rod
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Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
