Comment from JSD

Excellent

An excellent and enigmatic poem that is well structured and formed with assured use of rhyme. The imagery of the mask begs such a metaphorical treatment and you completely rise to the occasion it demands.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023

Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)

Comment from Lisasview

Exceptional

I just adored your story...and I am not one to read such long stories... But yours blew me away....
I just loved it...
May I make one suggestion... instead of ....her face he didn't see... perhaps a more poetic voice would be to say ..her face he did not see.. just seems to flow better..I read it out loud several times and felt I stumbled on didn't..(.and did not seems more poetic...)
as it really doesn't feel correct for your wonderful poem...
Lisasview, new to this site

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

Thank you for this exceptional review and for your suggestions...I'll look them over. I truly appreciate your reading my poem.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh wow, that's quite creepy and an original write! The story is absolutely engaging and the reader gets carried along on this enjoyable (occasionally bumpy) ride wondering what mysteries will unfold. The surprise ending is skilfully done. Thank you for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

Thank you for this great review, it's always appreciated. :)

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem. I see why it would win a contest. It has a Great flow and rhyme scheme. Your choice in photo works very well with your poem.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thanks so much for your nice comments. :)

Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

Wow, I just loved this! What a mysterious mood you set in the poem and the surprise ending was perfect! Each stanza just made me want to keep reading more! Very well done.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thank you. I just felt like reposting one of my poems and this is a favorite of mine.. Thanks for reading.

Comment from Carlos' girl

Excellent

You are channeling Edgar Allen Poe. Oh dear, a fateful night and a last chance at romance with a mask from a fateful shopkeeper and a fateful antique shop which was preordained for this poor hapless woman to wear. Life just isn't fair.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

I know, right! Especially these days, although I have to celebrate that we are still alive and well. Thanks so much for reading. :)

reply by Carlos' girl on 09-Jan-2021

You are most welcome; it is a wonderful poem that made me smile

Comment from Anne-Marie brison

Excellent

Dear author,

Incredible and interesting piece of work!!! Amazing job!! Wonderful word use intriguing!!! Thank you for sharing. God bless you and your family!!!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thank you, I appreciate you taking time to read my poem, and for this great review. :)

Comment from Fonda Little

Excellent

My favorite part was, "The mask had trapped another soul,
it always found a way.
she dreamed of all the night had held,
then later died that day.", because the twist you used near the end of the poem! Great job!

The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,

Proverbs 31:30 New International Version (NIV)

30 Charm is deceptive, and beauty is fleeting;
but a woman who fears the Lord is to be praised.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020

Thank you for such a fine review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an excellent read, story, and enchanting tale you have given us here, must admit I do feel for the poor gentleman, very well written and a very worthy winner, congratulations to you****kahpot

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020

Thank you so much for this great review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Boogienights!
Oh my goodness!
What a wonderful story-poem that reads so well aloud!
Full of creativity and story.
Full of keen and emotive imagery.
Full of rhythm and... allure!
Loved it.

Now... just one nit: Its (It's )something she had never felt

Congratulations on your win!

diane

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020

Thank you so much. Punctuation has never been my strong suit...lol. I'm glad you liked my my poem, and appreciate you pointing out my error. :)