Soulful at Birth
The breath of life embraced by the soul32 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about a soul that breath of life is embraced by the soul that exists in a body; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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This speaks about a soul that breath of life is embraced by the soul that exists in a body; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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thank you Alcreator Litt Dear, I always welcome and value your reviews.
Comment from royowen
There is, as I see it, so much truth to this brilliant little poem, I think all of us are born with that God given inheritance from our ancestors, also we are unique in the sense that that we inherit and yet we leave a deposit. Articulate with a slightly uneven meter but an excellent theme, well done, good post, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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There is, as I see it, so much truth to this brilliant little poem, I think all of us are born with that God given inheritance from our ancestors, also we are unique in the sense that that we inherit and yet we leave a deposit. Articulate with a slightly uneven meter but an excellent theme, well done, good post, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Roy thanks I am taking my first meter class with Jim Barlett this fall, so much more to learn. Wow!
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That?s great
