Upside Down
the wall8 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
Well provocatively thought and written while effectively our children and grandchildren rebelliously are against these drastic government's methods of security and awareness of what this uncontrollable pandemic really is and how to let them understand that it will still take longer to be set. Great work Iza throughout its short (as required) narrative story lined content.
P.S. At the beginning of the third line there is a linguistic superstructure between your native language and the linguistic use of the text
  |
Well provocatively thought and written while effectively our children and grandchildren rebelliously are against these drastic government's methods of security and awareness of what this uncontrollable pandemic really is and how to let them understand that it will still take longer to be set. Great work Iza throughout its short (as required) narrative story lined content.
P.S. At the beginning of the third line there is a linguistic superstructure between your native language and the linguistic use of the text
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
You did a good job with your entry for the Tale from the 3rd Millennium writing prompt contest. You used contemporary issues. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
|
Hello my friend
You did a good job with your entry for the Tale from the 3rd Millennium writing prompt contest. You used contemporary issues. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Well, it sure looks like the world, especially America, has gone downhill in just twenty years. The new norm is not desirable, people don't seem happier.
|
Well, it sure looks like the world, especially America, has gone downhill in just twenty years. The new norm is not desirable, people don't seem happier.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from w.j.debi
It will be interesting to see the long-term effects of this virus and the isolation we have been experiencing. Your vision is a creative take on what could happen.
Best of luck in the contest.
|
It will be interesting to see the long-term effects of this virus and the isolation we have been experiencing. Your vision is a creative take on what could happen.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from humpwhistle
Well, that's a pretty bleak view of the future . . . and the present, for that matter. I'm confused about how you lost your freedom of speech. I'm not sure I understand the stupidity/racist line, either. Maybe this'll make more sense in 2030.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
|
Well, that's a pretty bleak view of the future . . . and the present, for that matter. I'm confused about how you lost your freedom of speech. I'm not sure I understand the stupidity/racist line, either. Maybe this'll make more sense in 2030.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from royowen
I like this, this short period of the pandemic, we from being a moderately dangerous epidemic to a pandemic in a very short time, now we've got an international crisis. Beautifully written, a loved the way you story approaches this, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
|
I like this, this short period of the pandemic, we from being a moderately dangerous epidemic to a pandemic in a very short time, now we've got an international crisis. Beautifully written, a loved the way you story approaches this, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from roof35
You have some thought provoking words in this. In general, it is nicely done. I do wonder if you meant to say "you lost your fear that it will be the end." I read it a couple of times. You taught me a new word, "Lacist." Thanks for that.
 |
You have some thought provoking words in this. In general, it is nicely done. I do wonder if you meant to say "you lost your fear that it will be the end." I read it a couple of times. You taught me a new word, "Lacist." Thanks for that.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from oliver818
Great story, I enjoyed reading it. Yes I can see this happening. Especially the washing hand thing haha. Well I washed my hands before anyway but now it has become a bit of an obsession. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
|
Great story, I enjoyed reading it. Yes I can see this happening. Especially the washing hand thing haha. Well I washed my hands before anyway but now it has become a bit of an obsession. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
