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Remembering Yesterday

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A widow's journey into her relationship with her

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Comment from Ben Colder
Exceptional
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I could see this happening. Yes, Brandon had a radio station there, It's owner was Senator Johnson's son. They played my tapes each Sunday.
Good old days. Poor Pine Tree. It got a taste of Beth and her quick movements.
Enjoyed it Beth.
Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. I think you skipped the one called Moving Woes. It was one of the two you bookmarked. You don't have to give me all of your sixes. I'm pleased with the two I got.
reply by Ben Colder on 14-Jun-2020
    i was blown away with the Pine Tree accident.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
    Was the the Johnson who was later Governor. He was int he war and had a missing arm, I think. I never new where Brandon's station was but I looked it up and saw they had more than one over the year. I had a radio program one. I read stories to kids.
reply by Ben Colder on 14-Jun-2020
    Not really sure about Johnson, I had several stations at the time, Johnson called me from DC and sent me an invitation to Reagan swearing in as President.
Comment from royowen
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An excellent episode Beth, the car accident. Yes, frustration on the roads was my middle name, but funnily enough it has never affected my actual driving. But I can see where you are coming from. The kids would have got a shock. Just loving your biographical story, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Who later star(r)ed in some films. 2: As a(s) rule...

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and nice comments. My kids keep reminding me that Don lost is lunchbox and we never found it after that wreck.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 14-Jun-2020
    Isn?t that funny
Comment from Sankey
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Good chapter and an enjoyable read as usual. A few spags and suggestions. In Background...After twelve year(s) in Jackson,

Either...of proce[ed](ss)ing type fonts OR
of pro[ceed](duc)ing type fonts

who later star(r?)ed i

who spent [a] more time than I on your person(al)

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and comment and the corrections. FanStory put this out way before I was through with it and I didn't ever get a chance to read over. I was getting comments before I put any money on it or got a chance to release it.
    Beth (Thanks a bunch for all those stars)
Comment from zanya
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Moving house of course is always considered to be one of those stress inducing events in our lives - and especially when our children are young - a slice of family life told with candour and honesty - an enjoyable read

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
    I'm not sure what is going on. I'm not through putting this one on line yet. I haven't ever put in money on it. but Thank you for reading and commenting . FanStory is screwing me up.