Beating Heart Quivers
5/7/5 for contest12 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a lovely and enjoyable poem entry for the Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt. It should do very well in the contest. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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This is a lovely and enjoyable poem entry for the Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt. It should do very well in the contest. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Rebecca.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You are right, this is a beautiful bird:"beating heart quivers
on my hand gently and fast --
small painted bunting" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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You are right, this is a beautiful bird:"beating heart quivers
on my hand gently and fast --
small painted bunting" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, Iza.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about the little colorful bird with a quivering heart when we hold him gently in our hand, we wonder if he is scared or is it just the way his little heart beats all the time.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about the little colorful bird with a quivering heart when we hold him gently in our hand, we wonder if he is scared or is it just the way his little heart beats all the time.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Sandra :) have a peaceful day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a beautiful bird. You brought this little guy to life with your words, I would be delighted to see this one in its natural habitat, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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What a beautiful bird. You brought this little guy to life with your words, I would be delighted to see this one in its natural habitat, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, Dolly. I appreciate your time and review. Have a nice day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a beautiful bird. You brought this little guy to life with your words, I would be delighted to see this one in its natural habitat, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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What a beautiful bird. You brought this little guy to life with your words, I would be delighted to see this one in its natural habitat, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, Dolly. I appreciate your time and review. Have a nice day.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, mystery writer, I absolutely love this little 5-7-5 you've entered for the contest. I love the photo as well. Good luck to you, my friend. Enjoy your week! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Hello there, mystery writer, I absolutely love this little 5-7-5 you've entered for the contest. I love the photo as well. Good luck to you, my friend. Enjoy your week! ~Kerry
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely day.
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my pleasure. you too:))
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a beautiful bird, Mystery Author. Your picture is amazing. Good job with the prompt--correct syllables per line and a smooth flow of info in verse. Thanks for sharing. We have none of these little birds, but I'm on the edge of the desert. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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What a beautiful bird, Mystery Author. Your picture is amazing. Good job with the prompt--correct syllables per line and a smooth flow of info in verse. Thanks for sharing. We have none of these little birds, but I'm on the edge of the desert. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely day.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You felt the gentle and fast quivering heart beating of the small, colourful black bird, painted bunting, on your palm; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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You felt the gentle and fast quivering heart beating of the small, colourful black bird, painted bunting, on your palm; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely day.
Comment from roof35
A beautiful bird for a beautiful poem. This is well written and meets the rules. I like your words under the poem, too. Thanks for educating me about this lovely bird.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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A beautiful bird for a beautiful poem. This is well written and meets the rules. I like your words under the poem, too. Thanks for educating me about this lovely bird.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely day.
Comment from tfawcus
What a stunning looking bird. These small creatures do indeed have a rapid heartbeat, and their beauty can quicken our heartbeat, too. A visually impressive entry to the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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What a stunning looking bird. These small creatures do indeed have a rapid heartbeat, and their beauty can quicken our heartbeat, too. A visually impressive entry to the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely day.
