Beating Heart Quivers
5/7/5 for contest12 total reviews
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I really liked this and I thought your writing worked really well with the picture that you chose. I thought your first line, beating heart quivers, was particularly strong. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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I really liked this and I thought your writing worked really well with the picture that you chose. I thought your first line, beating heart quivers, was particularly strong. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely day.
Comment from Mia Twysted
That bird is so beautiful. I have never seen anything like it before. I wish I could see one in person.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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That bird is so beautiful. I have never seen anything like it before. I wish I could see one in person.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely day.
