What's Color Got To Do With It
A Two Line Poem18 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you choose to go with your poem. they are a perfect match. you captured the true meaning of it all This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I love the photo you choose to go with your poem. they are a perfect match. you captured the true meaning of it all This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent entry in the Two Line Poem contest, Kahpot. It holds a strong message about united strength and positiveness. I like the picture you've chosen to accent your words, as well. Best wishes!
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This is an excellent entry in the Two Line Poem contest, Kahpot. It holds a strong message about united strength and positiveness. I like the picture you've chosen to accent your words, as well. Best wishes!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
Comment from CrystieCookie999
How cool to get an end rhyme here in a short format. You did a good job on the color scheme. It is good to remember that people deserve equal rights.
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How cool to get an end rhyme here in a short format. You did a good job on the color scheme. It is good to remember that people deserve equal rights.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful answer to the challenge, kahpot -- equal means exactly what it says: there is no one above the other unless equality is not the goal... :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;) Yvette
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A beautiful answer to the challenge, kahpot -- equal means exactly what it says: there is no one above the other unless equality is not the goal... :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
Comment from Mark D. R.
Excellent summary of the way we should respect our fellow man in today's society! Good choice for the artwork that accompanies your rhymed entry.
Good luck in the voting,
Mark
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Excellent summary of the way we should respect our fellow man in today's society! Good choice for the artwork that accompanies your rhymed entry.
Good luck in the voting,
Mark
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
Comment from Cindy Decker
Hi!
This is a very excellent poem and nice author notes. I also love the photo. I was brought up in the 60's and 70,s when discrimination and bigotry and violence against Blacks were rampant. I hope that things get better between the races, because to conquer life, you need the Lord and teamwork.
Excellent work and very effective photo.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Hi!
This is a very excellent poem and nice author notes. I also love the photo. I was brought up in the 60's and 70,s when discrimination and bigotry and violence against Blacks were rampant. I hope that things get better between the races, because to conquer life, you need the Lord and teamwork.
Excellent work and very effective photo.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
Comment from Gloria ....
You did really well this, K and because you've basically written a monorhyme and some excellent social commentary too.
I think some people still don't quite grasp the concept of equality, and it's like everything, once you understand you wonder how you didn't, but up until then, it's a mystery.
Great job and best of luck to you with the voters.
Gloria
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You did really well this, K and because you've basically written a monorhyme and some excellent social commentary too.
I think some people still don't quite grasp the concept of equality, and it's like everything, once you understand you wonder how you didn't, but up until then, it's a mystery.
Great job and best of luck to you with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your essence poem with the multiple internal rhymes and the assonance. Most of all, your message is timely and important and may we all seek to be uniters of humanity. Best wishes in the contest!
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Great job with your essence poem with the multiple internal rhymes and the assonance. Most of all, your message is timely and important and may we all seek to be uniters of humanity. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
What's Color Got To Do With It
by kahpot
Hello, Kahpot,
Wonderful entry for the
Two Line Poem contest. We are all ONE in this planet Earth and we all have the inherited human right to be free and to Perdue happiness. In two lines you stablished that emotion. Well done my friend.
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What's Color Got To Do With It
by kahpot
Hello, Kahpot,
Wonderful entry for the
Two Line Poem contest. We are all ONE in this planet Earth and we all have the inherited human right to be free and to Perdue happiness. In two lines you stablished that emotion. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never understood racism, I only understand personalities and this is the only area I hold prejudice because if you can't get along with someone because their heart is in the wrong place then I would walk away, I blind to skin colour, but awake to people's hearts, a fine write, love Dolly x
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I have never understood racism, I only understand personalities and this is the only area I hold prejudice because if you can't get along with someone because their heart is in the wrong place then I would walk away, I blind to skin colour, but awake to people's hearts, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
