Going Out
A 100-word story about sisters16 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an excellent and strong entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt. I think it should do well in the contest, and I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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This is an excellent and strong entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt. I think it should do well in the contest, and I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much, Rebecca, for your kind praise and encouragement.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dick Waters
Rod, you've done it again! You took me there and then gave me a great surprise ending. Perfect timing.
Another great choice of a photo too.
Best regards,
Dick
P.S. I belong to the Arizona Authors association. It is open to anyone. If you have a chance please check it out. They are having an annual contest which ends the first of July. You're writing would stand a good chance of winning something. http://www.arizonaauthors.com/
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Rod, you've done it again! You took me there and then gave me a great surprise ending. Perfect timing.
Another great choice of a photo too.
Best regards,
Dick
P.S. I belong to the Arizona Authors association. It is open to anyone. If you have a chance please check it out. They are having an annual contest which ends the first of July. You're writing would stand a good chance of winning something. http://www.arizonaauthors.com/
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Hi Dick. I am really pleased you like this flash-fiction piece so much. Rockwell makes writing these shorties so much easier. Also, thank you for another link. You get around on-line much more than I do.
Comment from roof35
This is a cute story with a surprise ending and said in one hundred words. The picture, of course, pairs perfectly with your story. It is very nicely done. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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This is a cute story with a surprise ending and said in one hundred words. The picture, of course, pairs perfectly with your story. It is very nicely done. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my Rockwell ekphrastic. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Susan X Smith
Lil sister got revenge but I wondered if she was telling a fib since measles is normally a childhood illness. Anyway it was a cute story with a surprise ending.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Lil sister got revenge but I wondered if she was telling a fib since measles is normally a childhood illness. Anyway it was a cute story with a surprise ending.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my short-short. Well, her sister did call her ?Brat? and may have had good reason for doing so. Thanks for sharing, Susan.
Comment from lancellot
Well, that is what little sisters are for. I was awful joke, hopefully for the three of them. After the third date that week, he probably passed it on to her and her to the little sister.
A very nice scene.
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Well, that is what little sisters are for. I was awful joke, hopefully for the three of them. After the third date that week, he probably passed it on to her and her to the little sister.
A very nice scene.
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Oh, I hope he didn?t, but that would be a real possibility in those days. Thank you for sharing my story.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha naughty kid. Yup you better be in PJ and cry for not going to this date. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Ha, ha, ha naughty kid. Yup you better be in PJ and cry for not going to this date. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Iza, for sharing my story. I am delighted it made you laugh.
