Shifting Sands Of Time
A metaphorical lamentation52 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your award for this lovely poem--I missed the release--glad I caught up. Lovely imagery--castles in life's sand...shifting sands. Cheers. LIZ
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Congrats on your award for this lovely poem--I missed the release--glad I caught up. Lovely imagery--castles in life's sand...shifting sands. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from Earthlover
This was a very emotional poem to read. Life does have very difficult moments that we have to endure and your poem expresses those feelings in a powerful way.
Thanks for sharing your heart felt feelings in this writing.
Well done and thoughtful.
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This was a very emotional poem to read. Life does have very difficult moments that we have to endure and your poem expresses those feelings in a powerful way.
Thanks for sharing your heart felt feelings in this writing.
Well done and thoughtful.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from artisart4u
It is nice to put into words what is sometimes in your heart for a love one that meant so much to you and ask yourself, why. As you write each word you relive the time spent with this person.
I hope a lot of people will read this and good luck.
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It is nice to put into words what is sometimes in your heart for a love one that meant so much to you and ask yourself, why. As you write each word you relive the time spent with this person.
I hope a lot of people will read this and good luck.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful tribute to your wife who was taken from you long ago but your love shines through the years with grace and joy of the time you did have together.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
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A beautiful tribute to your wife who was taken from you long ago but your love shines through the years with grace and joy of the time you did have together.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from Ogden
Another terrific poem emerging from your past, and this time, tragic, life story, Jay!
You certainly haven't lost your touch!
Best wishes for many more years in good health!
Don
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Another terrific poem emerging from your past, and this time, tragic, life story, Jay!
You certainly haven't lost your touch!
Best wishes for many more years in good health!
Don
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from Aussie
A beautifully written love poem for your lost love. The AABB rhyming is perfect and the pace is just like a rocking horse. I loved it, pity we can't leave planet earth together but you will meet again. Well done K xx.
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A beautifully written love poem for your lost love. The AABB rhyming is perfect and the pace is just like a rocking horse. I loved it, pity we can't leave planet earth together but you will meet again. Well done K xx.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
It has been a while I know.
I love the words to your poem, they captured my attention from the first line to the last
I can feel the emotion with in your words
I understand how you fee, for felted the same way about my love.
Thank you for sharing cookie
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It has been a while I know.
I love the words to your poem, they captured my attention from the first line to the last
I can feel the emotion with in your words
I understand how you fee, for felted the same way about my love.
Thank you for sharing cookie
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from roof35
This is a lovely tribute to your wife and it is written so well it brings a tear to a reader's eye. I don't have six stars left or I would give it to you. This is marvelous.
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This is a lovely tribute to your wife and it is written so well it brings a tear to a reader's eye. I don't have six stars left or I would give it to you. This is marvelous.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
Comment from Ulla
Jay, I'm so very sorry for your loss. I understand that your wife died many years ago, but you still miss her sorely. YYou've written a lovely poem about your love and memory for what once was. Ulla:))
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Jay, I'm so very sorry for your loss. I understand that your wife died many years ago, but you still miss her sorely. YYou've written a lovely poem about your love and memory for what once was. Ulla:))
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
Comment from zanya
Such beautiful, poetic heart -rending memories of a beloved and such wisdom shared 'We built great castles in life's sand ' powerful metaphorical evocation
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Such beautiful, poetic heart -rending memories of a beloved and such wisdom shared 'We built great castles in life's sand ' powerful metaphorical evocation
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
