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A contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun write and you made me smile here and you had me in suspense until the final sentence, much enjoyed, the connection between father and daughter was ignored for the sake of work here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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A fun write and you made me smile here and you had me in suspense until the final sentence, much enjoyed, the connection between father and daughter was ignored for the sake of work here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments, glad I made you smile.
Comment from Rachel Joyce
Wow! So intriguing. I like the cliff hanger at the end. It leaves me wanting a lot more. I don't understand the picture you included, but overall the story was great. Keep up the great work! God bless you and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Wow! So intriguing. I like the cliff hanger at the end. It leaves me wanting a lot more. I don't understand the picture you included, but overall the story was great. Keep up the great work! God bless you and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much Rachel for reading, reviewing and your kind words. The picture was one in my search for 'soldiers' most were abstract in nature and because this was a pun on the Canadian Navy, I chose it. After all, I am Canadian by birth. (smile)
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oh wow! you are very welcome!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like this challenging story with a name; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you good luck in the Contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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I like this challenging story with a name; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you good luck in the Contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from AJ McCall
That was a good ending line. I didn't even know she was a woman. This is a great entry. Unexpected, unassuming, and can be swiftly read. I like this very much. Hope you win!
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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That was a good ending line. I didn't even know she was a woman. This is a great entry. Unexpected, unassuming, and can be swiftly read. I like this very much. Hope you win!
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much AJ for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
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You're welcome Aryr!! I love reading your writing.
Comment from roof35
This is terrific. The absolute best "Give Me Twenty" I have read so far. I would say you have a good chance in the contest. I think only those who enter it get to vote so I won't get the chance, wish I would as I would go straight to your entry. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is terrific. The absolute best "Give Me Twenty" I have read so far. I would say you have a good chance in the contest. I think only those who enter it get to vote so I won't get the chance, wish I would as I would go straight to your entry. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Also the six stars are wonderful. Again thank you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a great and original offering for this contest, Alie -- love the intrigue and the smile you manage in one that starts out so intense!! ;) :)Thanx for sharing, my lady, and good luck! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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What a great and original offering for this contest, Alie -- love the intrigue and the smile you manage in one that starts out so intense!! ;) :)Thanx for sharing, my lady, and good luck! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much Yvette for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
