Where's The Beef?
Arby's, We Have the MEAT57 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I'm arriving late to the party and so I see you were the contest winner--Congratulations! I don't think with my affliction of arachnophobia I'll ever step foot into an Arby's again...but then they were never on my top five fast food places anyway so there's that... Your mind was just weird enough (like mine!) to come up with this winner!--Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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I'm arriving late to the party and so I see you were the contest winner--Congratulations! I don't think with my affliction of arachnophobia I'll ever step foot into an Arby's again...but then they were never on my top five fast food places anyway so there's that... Your mind was just weird enough (like mine!) to come up with this winner!--Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much Karenina, I appreciate you taking the tine to read and review my work.
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My pleasure!--Karenina
Comment from ameen786
Congratulations! A wonderful poem that parents/grandparents can read to kids and enjoy at the same time; superbly rhymed with great flow.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Congratulations! A wonderful poem that parents/grandparents can read to kids and enjoy at the same time; superbly rhymed with great flow.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the tine to read and review my work.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown writer about the most fear I have of spiders
Your poem Just a Spider is really good, looks like in your poem you said,
" He spied with his eye,
A window of dead flies,
From where he sat,
He asked you gonna eat that?"
Looks like you came in first for the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Hello unknown writer about the most fear I have of spiders
Your poem Just a Spider is really good, looks like in your poem you said,
" He spied with his eye,
A window of dead flies,
From where he sat,
He asked you gonna eat that?"
Looks like you came in first for the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the tine to read and review my work.
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You are mos welcome Earl Corp
Gert
Comment from jenn7475
This is so cute, love it. I Would share this with my kinder class. The kids would love it. It flows well together. I like how he ordered a slider. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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This is so cute, love it. I Would share this with my kinder class. The kids would love it. It flows well together. I like how he ordered a slider. Great job.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for the six star rating, I would be very proud if you shared it with your class. I appreciate you taking the tine to read and review my work.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the tine to read and review my work.
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You're welcome.
Comment from RGstar
I am still trying to work out which group this is more suited to , children or adult? I have come to the conclusion a bit of both...between a children's poem and a limerick. Nicely situated in terms of the prompt, fits the narrative.
Wishing you luck with the prompt.
MY best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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I am still trying to work out which group this is more suited to , children or adult? I have come to the conclusion a bit of both...between a children's poem and a limerick. Nicely situated in terms of the prompt, fits the narrative.
Wishing you luck with the prompt.
MY best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the tine to read and review my work.
Comment from Tim Noble
Lovely rhyming poem. It doesn't say much but brings a smile to the reader's face. If all spiders liked coke and curly fries in preference to flies, they might almost be human.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Lovely rhyming poem. It doesn't say much but brings a smile to the reader's face. If all spiders liked coke and curly fries in preference to flies, they might almost be human.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the tine to read and review my work.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is such a cute little poem. The art work is adorable and suits your work perfectly. Best of luck and please stay safe during these terrible times. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is such a cute little poem. The art work is adorable and suits your work perfectly. Best of luck and please stay safe during these terrible times. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, if you are looking for encouragement, you will surely get it from me for this post.
I would only make these suggestions :
#1 put a period after curly fries. (you have competed the thought)
#2 you need to do the same after the word web.
#3 you need to make clear that your spider is asking a question of someone
Maybe you could say "He asked the waiter, Do you mind if I eat that?"
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Dear Author, if you are looking for encouragement, you will surely get it from me for this post.
I would only make these suggestions :
#1 put a period after curly fries. (you have competed the thought)
#2 you need to do the same after the word web.
#3 you need to make clear that your spider is asking a question of someone
Maybe you could say "He asked the waiter, Do you mind if I eat that?"
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the spider contest
with very good rhymes and humor.
That window of dead flies makes one really want to eat at Arby's. lol
The flies probably died from eating the new beef-less burgers.
No beef, no plants, just insects, please.
Well done
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the spider contest
with very good rhymes and humor.
That window of dead flies makes one really want to eat at Arby's. lol
The flies probably died from eating the new beef-less burgers.
No beef, no plants, just insects, please.
Well done
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much Robert. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
