Where's The Beef?
Arby's, We Have the MEAT57 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
I think your best shot was pretty good. It was fun and funny. Great artwork and presentation to enhance your well chosen words.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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I think your best shot was pretty good. It was fun and funny. Great artwork and presentation to enhance your well chosen words.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much Janet. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Bichon
Haha, I enjoyed this poem. It almost felt like something you would see in a child's novel. The rhyme was good and consistent too. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Haha, I enjoyed this poem. It almost felt like something you would see in a child's novel. The rhyme was good and consistent too. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Love the creativity to tie it in with the old Wendy's commercial, one of the funniest of all time. Great humorous entry for the contest. Keep on sharing that humor. Bill
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Love the creativity to tie it in with the old Wendy's commercial, one of the funniest of all time. Great humorous entry for the contest. Keep on sharing that humor. Bill
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Ogden
I'm aware that your spider at Arby's story may not be true, but nevertheless, is used to lampoon the firm's questionable sanitation efforts. (The 'window of dead flies,' line is particularly effective.)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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I'm aware that your spider at Arby's story may not be true, but nevertheless, is used to lampoon the firm's questionable sanitation efforts. (The 'window of dead flies,' line is particularly effective.)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Aussie
Interesting humor. Arby's must be a fast food joint? We don't have it here. I'm trying to be kind...the title doesn't seem to fit unless it's the meat in the flies? It's not bad, could be better. Have you read it back to yourself? I found it a little forced (with respect.)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Interesting humor. Arby's must be a fast food joint? We don't have it here. I'm trying to be kind...the title doesn't seem to fit unless it's the meat in the flies? It's not bad, could be better. Have you read it back to yourself? I found it a little forced (with respect.)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. Arby's is a fast food place that features roast beef.I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from CPL
Hahah! This is really cute. I love it! It creates a great visuals and I'm sure this would be a hit is kids! Maybe change "eye" to "eyes" because it's a spider and rhymes better with "flies" :).
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Hahah! This is really cute. I love it! It creates a great visuals and I'm sure this would be a hit is kids! Maybe change "eye" to "eyes" because it's a spider and rhymes better with "flies" :).
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from kahpot
Very well done, I like the last six lines the best as they seem to tell a story all on their own and give an image-starting with the flies, I enjoyed this, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Very well done, I like the last six lines the best as they seem to tell a story all on their own and give an image-starting with the flies, I enjoyed this, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a cute poem entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt. It is an entertaining poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is a cute poem entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt. It is an entertaining poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from roof35
This is a cute story. It is quite imaginative and you rhymed it well, too. The illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. This is nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is a cute story. It is quite imaginative and you rhymed it well, too. The illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. This is nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from nomi338
Eww. Spiders are disgusting, yet I love them because they eat flies who are much more disgusting. The best thing about spiders is that they do not fly around your head buzzing in your ears
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Eww. Spiders are disgusting, yet I love them because they eat flies who are much more disgusting. The best thing about spiders is that they do not fly around your head buzzing in your ears
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
