Where's The Beef?
Arby's, We Have the MEAT57 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
Be kind... I will. I like your poem. But, I don't like spiders. It's funny I wrote an acrostic poem on a spider a few months ago. It was funny, like your poem. First, I like your imagery of the spider looking devious, like he's looking for a meal. This poem is cleverly written and funny. The spider seeing dead flies while in the store and ask the question, "you gonna eat that?" This is a funny line. I enjoyed reading your Spider poem at Arby's, where they have the meat? Nicely written. Happy writing:-) Great photo!! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Hello,
Be kind... I will. I like your poem. But, I don't like spiders. It's funny I wrote an acrostic poem on a spider a few months ago. It was funny, like your poem. First, I like your imagery of the spider looking devious, like he's looking for a meal. This poem is cleverly written and funny. The spider seeing dead flies while in the store and ask the question, "you gonna eat that?" This is a funny line. I enjoyed reading your Spider poem at Arby's, where they have the meat? Nicely written. Happy writing:-) Great photo!! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Ewww, those dead flies! LOL! This is such a clever, skillfully-written poem. I love the way it rollicks along telling a delightful story. The rhyming and rhythm are good too.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Ewww, those dead flies! LOL! This is such a clever, skillfully-written poem. I love the way it rollicks along telling a delightful story. The rhyming and rhythm are good too.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Ulla
Hehehehe, It s funny actually. I liked it a lot. It took me a moment to get the pun and then I got it. It is a great entry for the contest, and wish you the best of luck.Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Hehehehe, It s funny actually. I liked it a lot. It took me a moment to get the pun and then I got it. It is a great entry for the contest, and wish you the best of luck.Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love the line, he didn't eat at his web, lol. That was so funny. What a clever spider poem you've written for the contest. It's fun, rhymes, and has loads of nice rhythm, and tells the story of the spider! Well done and good luck in the contest. ;)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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I love the line, he didn't eat at his web, lol. That was so funny. What a clever spider poem you've written for the contest. It's fun, rhymes, and has loads of nice rhythm, and tells the story of the spider! Well done and good luck in the contest. ;)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is as silly poem about what a spider really prefers to eat. I would guess the dead flies. It is dinner without the work of spinning a web..
Good luck in the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is as silly poem about what a spider really prefers to eat. I would guess the dead flies. It is dinner without the work of spinning a web..
Good luck in the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about eating at a place where the place are littered with dead flies and. Spider as a guest is not a very hygienic place to eat a meal without. Getting sick.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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A very well-written poem about eating at a place where the place are littered with dead flies and. Spider as a guest is not a very hygienic place to eat a meal without. Getting sick.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Bill Schott
This spider poem, Where's the Beef, finds the arachnid pulling in for a Whopper but settling for his go-to favorite food. Hope he can get curly flies...
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This spider poem, Where's the Beef, finds the arachnid pulling in for a Whopper but settling for his go-to favorite food. Hope he can get curly flies...
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Arby's, We Have the MEAT
Where's The Beef?
Hello my friend
This is funny and a great entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt contest. I would freak out if a spider was eating next to me. LoL well done.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Arby's, We Have the MEAT
Where's The Beef?
Hello my friend
This is funny and a great entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt contest. I would freak out if a spider was eating next to me. LoL well done.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
This cute little guy may be a celeb spider, but he still wants those dead flies in the corner. A Cute rhyme and little story about a hungry spider. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This cute little guy may be a celeb spider, but he still wants those dead flies in the corner. A Cute rhyme and little story about a hungry spider. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - this didn't make much sense, but I happen to like nonsense poems and this fit the bill. Do flies eat their webs? I was a little confused by those two lines. Actually, I think you could leave them out - just my opinion. Other than that, this was fun to read. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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LOL - this didn't make much sense, but I happen to like nonsense poems and this fit the bill. Do flies eat their webs? I was a little confused by those two lines. Actually, I think you could leave them out - just my opinion. Other than that, this was fun to read. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
