Where's The Beef?
Arby's, We Have the MEAT57 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
This is a very lovely humorous poem. I like your rhyming phrases; images of a brazen spider ordering at Arby's takes the stink out of my arachnophobia. Good luck in the contest and with all your writing
Cindy D
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is a very lovely humorous poem. I like your rhyming phrases; images of a brazen spider ordering at Arby's takes the stink out of my arachnophobia. Good luck in the contest and with all your writing
Cindy D
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much Cindy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Okay! This is hilarious! The only thing that I can find wrong with it is that I didn't write it@@ Great job!! Good luck with the contest!!
I'm still laughing!
Patty
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Okay! This is hilarious! The only thing that I can find wrong with it is that I didn't write it@@ Great job!! Good luck with the contest!!
I'm still laughing!
Patty
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much Patty. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I'm laughing at this one. Very funny. Also, I'll take my curly fries without the flies, thanks, lol. I'm hungry for fries now. It's all your fault. I hope you know that.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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I'm laughing at this one. Very funny. Also, I'll take my curly fries without the flies, thanks, lol. I'm hungry for fries now. It's all your fault. I hope you know that.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, I've heard that 'are you gonna eat that?' said many times. I enjoyed your fun spider poem, Mystery Author. I like your 'take' on it. You expressed your thoughts and feelings well as the spider. I could see this unfold as I read it. I like the rhymes, the image, and the smooth flow along with the fun story. The spider sure knows about Arby's. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Haha, I've heard that 'are you gonna eat that?' said many times. I enjoyed your fun spider poem, Mystery Author. I like your 'take' on it. You expressed your thoughts and feelings well as the spider. I could see this unfold as I read it. I like the rhymes, the image, and the smooth flow along with the fun story. The spider sure knows about Arby's. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much Jan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are humorous, awesome and creative. This poem
made me smile. The words flow and connect well. The artwork goes
well with the theme and words of this poem.
Hope you had a great day!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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The author's words are humorous, awesome and creative. This poem
made me smile. The words flow and connect well. The artwork goes
well with the theme and words of this poem.
Hope you had a great day!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from royowen
Well done, I think you've done a good job here, the narrative is witty, and of course with a harvest of dead flies in the window ego wouldn't be tempted, thank God my wife feeds me. Beautifully written, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Well done, I think you've done a good job here, the narrative is witty, and of course with a harvest of dead flies in the window ego wouldn't be tempted, thank God my wife feeds me. Beautifully written, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Bless you
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, I love your funny entry, I do thing you have a winner. I read a couple of time and still laughed. Yup the spider is a celeb and can't eat in the dirty web: "Because he was a celeb,
He didn't eat at his web,
He spied with his eye,
A window of dead flies,
From where he sat,
He asked you gonna eat that?"
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Wow, I love your funny entry, I do thing you have a winner. I read a couple of time and still laughed. Yup the spider is a celeb and can't eat in the dirty web: "Because he was a celeb,
He didn't eat at his web,
He spied with his eye,
A window of dead flies,
From where he sat,
He asked you gonna eat that?"
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
