Animal Antics and Interactions
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "A Dog With an Attitude"Animal that inspire me to record their stories.
12 total reviews
Comment from Mary Furlong
The story itself is very well done, thus the five stars. But you really should double check for spelling/punctuation errors. There are lots of them. Here are just a few: slicing glass dog for sliding glass door. Caustically for casually. An spitz instead of a spitz.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
  |
The story itself is very well done, thus the five stars. But you really should double check for spelling/punctuation errors. There are lots of them. Here are just a few: slicing glass dog for sliding glass door. Caustically for casually. An spitz instead of a spitz.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
-
Thank you so much for the review. I did read over it again and you were right. There were quite a few places that needed to be fixed.
Comment from lancellot
This is a very nice story, with a happy ending. It has all the elements to be a winner in a FS contest. Good idea.
notes:
"You'll get use to him,[]if you keep coming over.
- add space
For a small dog, he could leap almost to the top of the {slicing} glass dog.
- sliding
"Please, somebody! Get him off!", she pleaded.
We brought Dad into the house, in [a or his] wheelchair.
- add missing word
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
|
This is a very nice story, with a happy ending. It has all the elements to be a winner in a FS contest. Good idea.
notes:
"You'll get use to him,[]if you keep coming over.
- add space
For a small dog, he could leap almost to the top of the {slicing} glass dog.
- sliding
"Please, somebody! Get him off!", she pleaded.
We brought Dad into the house, in [a or his] wheelchair.
- add missing word
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
-
Thank you so much for reviewing this and for your comments and noticing the errors. I read back over it and fixed all of these and some others as well.
